I really like how the author portrayed the main character. Personality wise, he’s not the most likeable person. His character reeks of arrogance and immaturity, but I’m pretty interested to see how he develops as the story progresses. The flow of the story is smooth. The story is written with excellence with barely any grammatical mistakes, which I find common in many other online novels.
Overall, this book keeps you captivated, and I highly recommend it to others.
Ps, I found out about this book, through the author’s other novel: Undercover Superstar: A Song of Pyros & Snowflakes, which I suggest others to check out as well!
I'm going to give you 4 stars. I have only read ten chapters, but the book seems pretty good. The characters are well describe and there are also some funny scenes. I'm waiting more from you, Author-Sama.
I think it is time for me to made my review, tbh this book got a very great potential, I enjoyed reading this one.
Hoping author won't drop this, It was very fun for me to read.
I absolutely recommend this to all of you guys to read this is very very wonderful book.
The storyline is welldone, the romance are great, the harem are superb and the character are well define. One of the best novel smut i have read to date. My hope for this novel is that it is finish and for the author to produce another great smut novel. My best regard
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
Yeah, this one's an oldie. A proper chip off the block. It's written by Doulou Dalu's author, so you know what to expect. A pretty-boy, some side-kicks with pretty awesome abilites, a few beauties here and there. I personally got tired reading it during the middle and gave up, but kudos to you guys reading this.
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I like it it’s just that it’s on this website only which you need to create multiple accounts or buy things to unlock chapters which is kind of annoying but other than that it’s and amazing sorry but it would be n ie if you post it on another site
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Is this novel dropped? Wtf happends? No notice, no nothing. Suddenly just stopped updated. Please someone tell me what have become of this novels. Translator suddenly died or something?
You can tell it will be a good read just by looking at the title. 5 star for the MILFS.
I'm pretty sure the author had best interests in creating this story and I do think that indeed, a lot of thought was poured into making it. However, the initial chapters lack elements of keeping the book interesting - I mean it in a way that, too much information dump was done, tastelessly. It can bore anyone who wants to get an initial impression and overview of the plot. Thanks, but if you can do a few edits, that would be better.