It looked like his name being shortened caused a chain reaction - the other two familiars also asked for their names to be shortened into 'Leum' and 'Veri' and it seemed like the bird on August's shoulder also had a nickname… Albus noticed the bird only then. Like his master it lacked presence.
Kibo started to explain a bit of the knowledge he gained about their ability to transform, "Your Chakra Gates are what allow you to achieve this power, specifically your Manipura Gate is responsible for your Golden Super-Saiyan Transformation States."
so I like the plot but for me its good actually but i hope the author gives the mc a romance just not harem just one or two like that it will be perfect and the woman should be intelligent who have a goal it will be interesting.....??
Ik the author from discord and told me to check this out and I like it hopefully he don’t turn edge lord ?
The first chapter was really intrriguing, I liked it a lot. The only thing I would improve are the thoughts. Sometimes you wrote:‘...’And sometimes you just wrote:Atleast he didn’t...he thought.Just clarify how you want to say your characters are thinking as it will get a little bit confusing if you don’t.Other than that, the chapter is nicely written. t may lack a little bit of emotion but that’s just how I see it. You can imagine the characters well and how they act. You have a pretty clear view of them but still not much knowledge which I personally like because you reveal things step by step and don’t slam it into the readers face.Overall a reat book! Very recommendable?
interesting interesting captivating captivating
4.8 out of 5 you know the story sometimes a bit you know but it is amazing im looking forward for more chapters, It's not boring the character design is great including the unique abilities he had
It's very good, lots of good storyline, and it has a very unique story starting point. Honestly, I fell like a story where an NPC gets a guide would be a good one.
It 's a decent read. Lots of content available. World building felt pretty solid and fleshed out. Story is developing and has potential. Most of the characters are well written. My main issue is with the MC. It's like he gets the most story time but the least emotional development of all of the characters. Many chapters in, and he is still very much an out-of-touch teenager that struggles with his insecurities. His sense of justice is very skewed and relatively confusing. The moral dilemmas that he's faced has NOT given him much maturity at all. It's also a tough read when he struggles as he is not a graceful struggler (compared to say Adonis). He feels and remains overall toxic and emotionally stunted. The otherworlders in Adonis' group, in comparison, feel more relatable and dynamic. They grow from their experiences and it shows in their dialogue and actions. When I read their sections, it feels like I'm reading about young adults, not teenagers. This basically results in a static MC that has become increasingly difficulty to root for after hundreds of chapters. As this novel leans into tropes, it's pretty ironic as well that MC (as the OP Extra) feels more like a puppet vs his enigmatic rival (who feels like he should be the Extra)... Just my opinions. Thank you to the Author for giving me content to consume and hopefully my mind gets changed in the future chapters.
This story is really interesting and intriguing, it will keep you on the edge of your seat. Everyone should give it a go!
I CANT READ SERIOUSLY BECAUSE SHIT WRITING STYLE AND THE MC IS IDIOT AND FOOL, YOU WANT TO BUILD A KINGDOM BUT HE'S WEAK! A KING MUST BE STRONG AND JACK OF ALL TRADES AND MASTER OF NONE AND WHAT THE USE OF SYSTEM? JUST LIKE TO SEE HIS STATUS? TSK AND GAMER MIND? HE PANIC ALL THE TIME WHEN CRISIS ARISES LIKE IN THE TROLL ARC TSK WEAK
You give us a character who is a line wolf and uncaring who i like then dozens of chapters about sİde characters which makes the whole thing very very boring you should have made a caring mc if side caharacters were so important, as mc doesnt care i dont either