so far the novel is good _the plot is promising that demonstrates that you have a rich imagination _i want to ask you is he going to become overpowered 'step by step' or 'fast' ?_is there going to be harem ? in case there is one how many members?
This is great so far but please stop making the mc afraid of the Tang girl it's sad to see he need to man up many she can help him find his mother but I think ur building by there relationship it seems like she the reincarnation of the girls he saved maybe she still died I don't no but I hope it's the case thanks for the hard work
Muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito muito obrigado por esse ótimo novel
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
First of all if you hate slow novels this ain't for you like seriously am at chapter 60 and their honest hasn't been nothing exciting about it but this is how slow novels are they build up a good world with good character and from their slowly build up the excitement. So hopefully this kicks up after say most slow novels do in about the 100 chapter.
Saw you on subreddit TheGamer and came here. Nice going though. It looked almost similar to gamer at first but it is getting better and different with every chapter. Keep it up and do not drop it midway.
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The story is good. If this continue this novel will be amazing. The problem in grammar and spelling is only minor and will not damage the story overall. The writer also improve as the chapter progress. This novel is worth noting.
Splendid writing skills. Quite immersive, I thought I was the one the creature was talking to. Also, how he stated the system status is marvelous! Keep it up!
I read 30 chapters! The novel is interesting! Not easy! The character lives in two worlds! Dialogues are well written in the story! The world is described fascinatingly, creatively! The character of the character, I still do not understand until the end, but here you just need to read on! There is humor in the novel, there are also some deeper thoughts!I want to wish the author to be more attentive to details, if in doubt, specify, check. But this does not affect the general text block of the novel, it is really interesting, fascinating and intriguing!As an author, I could learn from this novel how to compose such interesting and lively dialogues! Bravo, author, thank you for such an interesting story!No wonder I included it in my library! I will read it slowly! Thanks for the wonderful written story!With admiration
Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future