I hope you do multiverse xianxia apocalypse starting from earth next after you finish this book. something like defiance of the fall i really like this idea but it’s never been done how i like and i think with your writing style you will do it very good
the noise and lies of the world paired with the blessing of rebirth, the chance for justice - a successful arc of suspense that makes you want more of it... hopefully soon!
Story is fairly interesting, and has a lot of potential. I am excited to see where the author takes the story. While the story has a number of good points such as having an interesting concept, strong system and a fairly smart non beta MC, it also has several problems that I’d hope to see improve as the story continues. I don’t believe the author is a native English speaker though i coudl be wrong, so there are a number of wrongly used words, places with poor grammar, misspelled words and general dissonance in the story, though they have little impact on the story itself and don’t affect the reading experience that much. There are also a number of strange choices, background information and world building decisions that negatively impact the flow and immersion of the story but they aren’t too numerous or aggregious and I think that as the author continues they should improve in this aspect. Overall it’s a promising novel and I’m looking forward to seeing what happens
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Wow! I liked it alot! The characters feel *real*. Looking forward to reading more, and would recommend anyone who likes military, sci-fi or futuristic worlds to pick it up.Their lives feel full and kind of remind me of watching a movie - but one that I can't quite place. The pacing is gradual, fleshing out the history and surrounding world - can't wait for more! Only problem is... only 4 chapters? And it stops just when it's getting exciting :(
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WOH! I LOVE THE BOOK!!!! GREAT WORLD BACKGROUND AND GENRE!!! Needs a little more of editing but I love it!! <3 I highly recommend this book!
I only read to like chapter 10 (and I can usually read a good 30-40 chapters before I make my decision) and I had to stop it was so terribly cliche it wouldnt even qualify for a mediocre face slapping novel I have honestly never seen a translated work that was so cookie cutter to cultivation novel cliches and STILL not have any flavor like at all **** was literally like "oh no I'm a simp and I've been ntr'd by some young master and the girl likes him too it was a trap to take advantage of me so now she's a slut everyone around is trash and after my first near death encounter I get heavenly defying powers and don't even flinch guess all I can do is just effortlessly swat away stepping Stones for cheap power ups and any fight that would actually pose a challenge doesn't have anything to do with my skill and talent but my op powers takes care of it cause why not also don't forget that my cultivation system is vague af and all we get told is sutra name the cultivation stages literally nothing else and I have no doubt down the line (as seen in the ongoing 7k chapters) that to him these stages actually mean nothing cause when he'll get to core formation equivalant TM he'll be stronger than everybody on the planet cause of [insert nonsensical cultivation technique power up or miscellaneous power up encounter]" this is quite literally like my second or third review I've left for a book on this app and I've been around since it started and this terrible novel has made me so infuriated with it's less than mediocre quality that I typed this out...Translation quality was pretty good tho solid B at least
Hope this gets picked! I really enjoy transmigration plus system novels, especially since these kinda usually have little to no racism. Reminds me a bit of Way of the Devil
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