The idea of the story is excellent and had me invested almost immediately.The plot moves a little fast, but that isn’t much of an issue.Writing quality is pretty good, very few mistakes.Overall, this is an excellent idea, but it’s execution needs refinement. I do not follow the logic for many of the actions the characters take, and plot holes are prevalent, especially in the early chapters.With a bit of rewriting and editing this could be a 5/5 story; keep it up author!
Lovely beginning... Looking forward to more!
I haven't seen something so consistent in forever, it's amazing, a definite read!
Good storytelling, and nice comedy. The main character is very likable, the supporting characters are also likable. This is the best novel to start if you just got into web novels. Fresh to read, no harem, no romance, the mc is very independent and intelligent. It's easy to read and very entertaining so far.
Kindly update regularly, the story has potential, worth reading.
Good so far. I say give it a chance. Drama is good
JAXON, THE AUTHOR, DOESN'T NEED A TALENT SYSTEM UNLIKE JASON SINCE HE IS ALREADY TALENTED AFTER WRITING THIS PEAK NOVEL.
I just checked ro see y no more chapters r coming out and I saw it was finished... honestly feom the titles of the chapters and where im at in the book is over chapter 600 it seems like it was rushed to be finished... honestly I really really like this book and thought it had a lot of potential and yes a lot of things happen that where unexpected for the main character but its a book and things happen but it was still good and think it shouldnt have ended for at least a little more time... I hope that maybe it gets changed and keeps going a little more and has an ending worth the book and honestly I dont want to emd for a while because I enjoy this book a lot!!
I can't read more of this. The grammar is god-awful, and it does NOT get fixed later on. Decent premise, terrible translation. I can feel my braincells die reading this.
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So I got here from Instagram and I must say that this is such an amazing work ? ? ? ✨️. Writing is really not easy and you choosing that part to take is a very wonderful decision, keep it up. Ps: I already have a favourite character ? ❤️
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