This is a really nice story, I'm not a fan of first person POV but the author did a great job in writing. The synopsis is really nice and the story is something worth reading
Supporting the author. I like the first chapter and the system seems interesting. The only complaint— Give more updates. Expecting the story to do well. Good luck.
"Oh yeah, Kaenjieeeeee!" i answered with a smile.
"I mean... come on!" She laughed. "Can't you think for yourself?"
"I understand..."
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I'm in class talking to Susana and Lee about our maths . I hate maths and so do they too. And I heard that there will a pop quiz this Friday. I was nervous because it is my first quiz after I got here. But Lee comforted me. " You should asked Vic to help you out" Susana said. Victor is the guy who get great grades. He is practically a nerd but doesn't seem so. I turned to Victor and asked " Hey, could you later tutor me maths during break?". He looked up from the book he was reading and said " Sure". Lee and Susana begged him to tutor them as well. He agreed out of pity.
As he continued his ventures with the kind fishfolk something the fisherman called themselves their haul for fresh fishes always increased as being an Atlantean he could tell about the water as much as the fishes themselves the fishfolk took the hauls as a sign of their good deed of not throwing or abandoning me in the ocean or forrest something that I am so much happy for.
It all brought back emotions and memories. Back when she was still a young fox, she often visited places like these. She guessed that this was some sort of sect, and sects were her favorite places in the past.
The ice we skate is getting pretty thin
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
So what's wrong with taking the back streets?