Lord_Raven
Hi all, yes it's me again, your translator chuchutrain. Really happy to be taking over to translate once again for Qi Peijia's novels, after finishing The Legendary Mechanic almost a year ago! For those of you who are long term fans of Black Star, come join me in this ride of Sci-fi/game element + some cultivation aspect (new twist that QPJ is planning)! For those new to his books, just sit tight and enjoy how he spins the story :) (p.s. you can take a look at TLM in the meantime)
Having read the first 20 chapters I feel that this is decent enough to be picked for translation (fingers crossed) that is assuming that the story continues in a good direction. There is a lot of room for the story to grow and for the MC to develop should the author put in the effort. Still it's decent quality for a webnovel
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Same World Background and Storyline as Era of Castles: Starting with 99 Dragon Eggs. If you are the type of person that likes reading formula novels (like certain Romance genre novels) centered on different MCs and this game genre is good for you then enjoy. Otherwise only read one of the 2 books!
Personally I like the story enough that I'm going to continue reading both up to at least chapter 60 before deciding if which one I like better, assuming they get those chapters. Era of Castles is in the vote page now, so it will eventually pass. But at least one book I wanted to read has passed the vote and then stopped at 55/55 chapters without explanation, so I'm not very confident that passing the vote matters much.
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Literally just a worse version of let me game in peace
Dont recommend
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What should I say?
Just read the book, man!
You want everything that a reader wants, you can have it.
As for the rest, you can just use your own feeling to continue reading it or not.
Great writing, funny characters, intresting and unique plotpoint. What more could someone want. A great read by far, and easily one of my new favorites.
No puedo leerlo me jode está maldita webnovel tanto dinero y ala final no puedo traducir al español perdí dinero osea solo puedo votar y espera aver si consigo la novela por otros medios pagando $$
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If you're into dual cultivation su yang novel,you would definitely love this as this novel ngl is alot more better as the story pacing + development have been really well done plus all the girls that was introduced into the harem have well written character setting + background story. 10/10 story that you won't regret reading!
With 50 free chapters released and more steadily on their way, now is a good time to write a first review – one I will gladly come back to upon this work's conclusion sometime in the future.This is the third work in the author’s collection, one completed and one on hiatus, and the experience clearly shows. The author has continued to fine-tune their craft while leaving their core style clearly identifiable, and I am very excited to see how this story develops.The style is simple and succinct, though not lacking flair. Ease of reading and clarity aside, it lends itself particularly well to the expressive, larger-than-life dialogue, a prominent feature in the author’s works. The vivid and emotionally charged interactions of the characters play an incredibly active part in all aspects of writing, from characterization to world-building. It is a breath of fresh air in lieu of the swathes of grimdark and apathetic one-liners we readers are all too familiar with. The characters themselves live up to these expectations, their outlines clearly defined from the start, while leaving more than enough room for growth as the story develops. At the time of publication of this review, the main trio has been introduced and developed in great detail, yet sacrificing none of the mystery of unknown or untrustworthy character backgrounds. As the main powerhouse prepares for a wholesome exeunt, the two main protagonists, almost direct opposites of each other in all manner of ways, provide the author with a blank canvas to develop alongside the story’s progression. The world-building of the last fifty chapters provides a solid foundation for this approach, hitting all the right buttons. There’s intrigue, mysterious world politics, an innovative power system and enough enemies, hidden or otherwise, to keep the protagonists occupied for many story arcs to come. The power system especially is one I’m interested in learning more about. To avoid spoilers, it takes an unique three-pronged approach with some tasteful strategic terminology that leaves a lot of room for individuality. Unlike in many stories out there, the protagonists are not blessed with a completely unique class or unheard of element. Seemingly aiming to subvert this trope we instead have common building blocks, which will certainly build up to much more by virtue of characterization and originality, and not a fated bestowal of power because you happened to be in the right dungeon at the right time. The story is set up to be an epic progression fantasy, but with a twist best described as “out with the old and in with the new”, which you may have already picked up on. There are no issues with the grammar or linguistic quality of the writing, so the readers will have an unimpeded reading experience.I am rating it five stars for the quality so far and the great potential beyond, and would certainly recommend everyone to try it for themselves. If you are interested in well thought-out and slow power progression, lively characters, a methodically structured and intricate world, and an adventure story leaning more towards wholesome than dark, this is the book for you.
