If you're curious about how to ruin an intriguing plot, this serves as a prime example. The start isn't exceptional enough to be hailed a masterpiece, but it provided me with quite a chuckle and unexpected enjoyment. My expectations were so low that I approached it with minimal anticipation. Reading it without analyzing, I was able to genuinely appreciate it. However, dear Lord, the main character (MC) is where the issue lies. Can't he just... pause for a moment when a woman appears? I could overlook it, but seriously...
(Spoiler alert)
The moment he sees that pink-haired girl, he starts scheming about bedding her. Hold on, buddy, take a deep breath!
This isn't the only problem. The MC's lack of relatability and frustrating behavior is another issue. Despite displaying moments of intelligence and determination, he crumbles under pressure, turning into a coward who can't think straight or a mindless brute driven by desire. It's like he has mood swings; it's incredibly inconsistent and leaves me questioning his decisions.
In conclusion, I hope the story doesn't continue down this path. The premise is solid, and honestly, that's what kept me going. I won't delve into illogical occurrences because they're almost amusing in their absurdity. But seriously, cut back on introducing new love interests and give the MC some depth. He's not a mentally unstable character, right?
The synopsis is interesting
But the tags kinda scared me...i'm gonna dive in, so wish me luck
I really feel sorry for cardel. She doesn't deserve being in the middle of it.
Author doesn't own the story or something like that. So it's done.
I can't read past few chapters on my PC
Because your world is too small like a frog at the bottom of a well you should read more chapters and discover more human qualities, if a sudden apocalypse arrive this is more likely to happen as no one wants to get hurt and die young or they have some precious family to protect and when you still have more ideals and goals to achieve in the future and suddenly all of those ideals collapsed. Most of the people who survive most likely wont be able to accept it like religious individuals who rely and pray to god for there well being knowing a godlike existence suddenly turn their lives into chaos.
try out 'trash of count'
true it was a good story of its own when there was monthly release of chapters I excitedly binge read it. but when the creator has stopped developing one of his best novels I became disappointed, sadly you can still read it but lower your expectations and treat it as passing time.
The story is genuinely adorable, featuring a character who is not just golden from the thighs but has a completely golden appearance. It's a relaxing read.
I am discontinuing my engagement with this content, but I have a few issues to address. The author's ability to develop a cohesive plot seems severely lacking. The writing style evokes memories of my early, poorly executed chapters. Numerous disconnected events occur without clear connections, and even when considering the broader context, the execution falls flat. One could easily skip through sections without losing much by reading just a couple of sentences.
My next concern lies in the strength of the plot. If it's weak, characters should carry the story, but they don't. They lack depth and appear one-dimensional, possessing only a single defining characteristic. Initially, I didn't intend to rate this, but accidentally did so. Now, I'm unsure how to remove the rating...
Is this R-18?
I've currently read up to chapter 15.Translation is about as bad as it can be but readable.Protagonist seems to be the typical ultra moron and meddling idiot who will blush and bumble around the second he sees a woman but at least he does seem to have some will of his own. And although he is stupid beyond belief (seriously he is pretty much asking to be ripped off and made use of by any Npc) he at least has the mind to pretend to be the princess envoy to avoid difficulties with the authorities.Prediction, he will amass a harem of little girls with animal ears while being worked to death by the royalty.Update at chapter 32Translation improved drastically, too bad that the OG content itself is still braindead. No one has any sort of personality, all the characters just serve as exposition dump or to be acted upon. Mc is bland and the only trait he shows now is being horny aside from still being dumb as fuck.Update at chapter 42While there are a few neat ideas it's not worth suffering through imho. Best of luck to all who read this you'll need it.If you look for something similar, check out slave harem in the labyrinth. It's still no war peace but at least ten times better than this mess.