[Reviewed on: 26-09-2021][Reading status: 7th Chapter] •••[Strong points:]- The first hook is in the synopsis 'eunuch mage' which leaves a whole room for imagination. - The pace in initial 7 chapters is kind of slow but believe me you'll be soon immersed within the descriptive style of the author.- A reasonable amount of explanation is sprinkled throughout the chapters, with an utter emphasis on the development of the MC. - The author did an immensely enjoyable part in turning the cliches upside down, the parents are supportive, siblings of the MC are teasing yet the bonding is there. However one brother sounds suspicious nonetheless. The master of the MC is determined to guide him too, hence you won't experience the typical chinese cultivation novel storyline. - The narration is highly readable, with less-to-none mistakes (although I didn't spot any in 7 chapters) which makes the reading experience smooth.- Everything flows within a vivid picture that the reader can imagine the whole scenario and surroundings effortlessly, I didn't face any trouble imagining and playing the descriptive combat with the beasts. - However there's no hook in chapter 1 and 2 but the gradual process of MCs daily life and the preparation for the test is also interesting. - Chapter 6 and 7 unlocks the spice of excitement when we see the MC getting his skills and awakening his aura and other abilities. - And tbh I've never seen such combination of the skills and powers (or perhaps haven't read yet on WN) and thus this work was a good one to read.- The verbal abuse and insult by the audience which MC received also shows us his desperation and hints back the reasons why he wants to leave the palace. - Then next comes the system, which is 'passed down' to the MC by his father. Which itself was kinda weird thing to read, but in a good way. Since I wasn't expecting the system to arrive in that particular aspect. [Weakness:]- The descriptions of the characters regarding their hair, eyes, figure etc was kinda unnecessary. As a reader I skipped them and I believe most would also skip those paragraphs since we can't really register so many characters by crafting their physical forms in head.- The title of the story of extremely bland which is a big deal I'd say, and since now I've read up to 7 chapters I'd conclude that it requires a change immediately. Title shoulde be catchy enough equally as synopsis or why would readers even bother to click on the book. Since synopsis appears after the cover and title. [Note for future readers:]Please give it a go upto 7 chapters at least before concluding anything about the book. Thank you~
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The book is overall a very good piece of work and is getting a good response in the growth in the views, the overall rating is also good. What a nice novel!
Author's Review!Well, what happens when you get bored with the same old MC sitting in lotus position and cultivating his life away?Dual cultivation and the fact that only MC could cheat using this without any common sense or logic? Bored with Alchemymaster/Forgemasters/Swordmasters/Formationmasters etc etc etc MC's?Here I present to you a unique way of cultivation, Kama Sutra. Kora Le Blank(MC), a being with a transcendental mentality, couldn't leave behind his sensual desires even though he knew nirvana could only be achieved via letting go of all mortal desires, treads on the demonic path where virtue and sin are non-existent, using rituals as a method to grasp what he so desires--Nirvana.
First!!! Haha no one cares, but anyway this novel sounds nice and knowing webnovel the translation will probably suck and i may change my review and delete this one if i have to.
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If you are expecting this novel to be an otaku turned good looking. Who then starts to chase his dreams to become a kpop idol, while building a harem, its not. He goes to his first audition on chapter 41. for the first 40 chapters its a high school/slice of life/rom com. After chapter 41 it turns in to a slice of life/rom com, with more actual kpop stuff happening. The MC has a dream to have a harem but i think its just part of his mentality as an otaku, but the author is not going to give him that harem. So the MC just talks about it, but the harem wont happen. The author for what ever reason likes to make the MC brake the 4-rth wall and talk to the author. I don't really like it at all and i'm not the only one that does. But if you read this novel and also find the 4-rth wall braking annoying just do what i did and skip those parts and pretend they never existed to begin with.
I'm not one to really like romantic comedy's or slice of life's since they are always slow paced and boring to me. But this one is not bad, i don't hate it, But its not my favorite. it is extremely slow paced in the beginning when it comes to the MC actually chasing his dreams and not just have it as a dream till many chapters later. The chapter lengths are allover the place. Some chapters are 3,000 words while others are 800 words.
So far so good. This is mainly a thank you for your help on critizing my book. Keep up the good work, I'm cheering on you............[img=recommend]
Don’t mind me, just a shameless first stealer giving a 5-star review. If your read the book, you’ll understand why I gave it 5-stars, and if you look at the chapter comments, you’ll understand why I’m a first stealer.
Webnovel butchering more novels. Tranlation is bad, and the translators are adding in plot points that don't exist in the original work. If you are wondering why they are using carriages and carrying things manually despite the MC 'having a spacial storage ring,'it's because the ring and the knight profession book don't exist in the actual work.
Great book please update more often
As early as chapter 3 you will already realize that this novel will be full of nationalism and probably racism as they go hand in hand..........