Basically, another one of those simulation novels. Except that each life is identical to the previous one, making it more of a time loop. So that's somewhat original. Other than that, the story is just as lacking in plot, character development, and quality as every other simulation novel.
I've been waiting for another misunderstanding novel to show up since my last one just ended so abruptly. This one is starting slow, but it's so interesting!
The more I read, the more I enjoy. I just felt like writing another review to say that!
The characters are well thought out and intriguing and I want to find out more.
I am certainly enjoying it so far!
I am liking it so far. Narrative is really good. Espacially the world building. I just want the writer to keep uploading new chapters.. [img=update]
It's my book, soooo... I meannn... obviously 5 stars.
But being honest, I believe that it's actually worth such a rating.
If you like sports, then hop on for the ride, I guarantee you won't be disappointed, and well, there's a bit of romance as well if you want to see it.
Also, this book doesn't have anything supernatural apart from the time regression/displacement at the beginning of the story, so if you fancy something like that, you could hop on the ride too.
All in all, I think, it's a book you'll enjoy reading, so read, add it to your library, vote powerstones, leave a review and we'll all be happy.
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I am a big fan of modern military vs fantasy military. But it’s in short supply these days. So, the premise of this novel is very exciting to me. And the dialouge has that feel of proper military training. When I first read the chapter, I was a little worried about why you would choose Iran. Then I remembered that there are supposed “Stargates” ruins in Iran as well as Iraq. So, it would be the perfect explaination for the transmigration into another world. Keep it up.
This is so funny and interesting from chap 1 to 7 i just read is worth reading
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Reading few the first batch of chapters was rather delightful.Theo has a great sense of pacing and character, and it really comes out in how his MC interacts with the people around him.There's a great sense of realism in how the MC thinks and responds, and overall I feel this story is a solid start that will blossom into something amazing.That said, there are some noticeable errors in writing that can be easily fixed with an editing pass or two, and I feel like more can be done to distinguish the settings, especially where the games occur.Solid 4.6 for now.
In summary “He lived his youth in vain as a rich second generation and squandered his family’s wealth”First chapter, paragraph 4“My family’s financial situation is not good, so I chose to work part-time to earn my living expenses after I entered university”Story is completely different from synopsis, and it doesn’t stop here.
Nice start and has a good premise.If you are into detective novels then I highly recommend you should try this.The writing quality is almost perfect.Just keep more chapters comming.
The first thing I see a cover that needs some working, I am sure you could use an AI program to make your work stand out and more attractive, the synopsis could use some work to draw your users in. *Please note I only want to help you get better as I only seek to better my fellow writers* The beginning pages are very short, WN goes by 1.5k to 1.6k depending so I assume you are a new author, but it is interesting I hope you continue to do what you love.