Personally I like the story so far although I need more chapters to judge I think you need to describe at least the appearance mc and supportive characters keep up the good work ?❤️
SO far a Great read keep it up Zephy. I really like your style. hjuicvdbhsjlvfuislgfhdusi;lhvgfdjisghvjusilhfgjushvjidslghdkjsdkjsbgvklivgbxckbfdvnm,lbvhkjbvghk.lbrg hk.dfsbvhjdflsbv
This story was amazing. I thought the prologue was the same as mostly isekai, but I was wrong. For a couple of chapters, the author success in playing reader emotion.The plotting story is easy to imagine, as I'm in the story itself.I look forward to another chapter...
It would leave everyone hanging by a thread and still on their toes.........................................................................
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Now, when I started reading this novel, I tried so hard not to complain. It's just feels so rushed. Like the first 5 chaps are like wh-what so he dea- but now he's in the hospi- and eait hes killing people no- and it's yyyyyy. But cough cough, here's how I feel on the novel. MC : it's a better then average MC, like 4 star range. World backgrounds average, but it'd a bit early to say that. But as I know my back, I know NOTHING interesting, or well explained. (Maybe thats my fault as I was confused for info dumps.) STORY : Is again but still to early for reader to get thr juicy bits. And thats a very bad and basic review of mine. (Probably the former)So all I'll say untill a 100 chaps later is, slow down and explain ur stuff, add ways to show the viewers transitions, or just dont make ne miss somebody dead in a line. I look foward to what Mr.Author will bring.
I think the only problem with the is the biggeSt deal breaker the passing is HORRIBLE i mean itS baaaaadddd and hard to understand ...........
Great potential if well executed. Video game aesthetic in power systems has sort of become a cliché at this point but I believe the author will be able to find a new approach to the genre.It is a bit on the nose and the main character gets over grief a bit too fast, but everything else seems fine.I will probably catch up with future chapters.
It's a shame about the hiatus, good news everyone, i got in contact with the creator, twas covid. Them getting back to writing soon is a possibility.