the premise and characters are nice but the grammar and spelling mistakes are so frequent it is crazy how this ended up as the freebie today.author, this one just isn't for me because even by WN standards this is just too broken but I don't want you to think I'm just trashing it. The romance scenes were well done and i liked how you structured his awakening while still leaving some mystery. With a good editor or grammarly, I could see this book on Amazon tomorrow.
I really like the novel. Its a fairly interesting take on the game developer novel type and is by far my favorite out of the game developer novels i’ve read. Really enjoy how the mc is «interacting» with the cultivation world. :)
honestly. I hear people talk about Idiot MC.that was chapter two. of course, she's an idiot. zero life growth of any kind before death. though some of the grammar and accuracy of science could use some work, all in all, it's not bad of a book. Definitely read worse. If I wanted an immaculate English reading with solid consistency, I read Tolkien. this is not a terrible book, but you definitely need to be patient with it.still give it average views, but keep it up, author. practice does, in fact, make perfect.
A parody of MHA and Pokemon... say no more author, this is a five star for me. Will be looking forward for more updates! Have a great day author!!!!
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There was definitely a period around chapter 70 or so where the quality of the writing dropped tremendously and it was really difficult to read. but after powering through it was definitely worth it. It isn't the best story ever, but it was unique and very entertaining.
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Never! Never!
"Carl, we just want to know why you did this, please answer seriously, we just want to help you."
The class leader quickly stand up. "Stand ... up ...."
This world was created by 2 Gods, Light and Dark. Light and Dark are a Gods who have the appearance as a kid. Light like luminous figures, all of body is shrouded by a glowing light and Dark is shrouded by darkness, pure darkness.