I really liked the fanfic author and his other novel "I alone am the honoured one" , so I have high hopes for this novel , so far 5 chap in and it looks really good , let author cook !
As a fan of BTS, also known as the ARMY, Bae Seoyeon and Han Sooji were lucky enough to get a ticket for the upcoming concert which sold out 3 minutes after released.
If you’re into Solo leveling type stories then this is for you. There’s a lot of things that are said that contradicts the actions that are done. At best go into this story to enjoy the action potential and turn off brain when reading this because it’s questionable at best of the things that transpired so far.
this novel has really good world and character building, and the plot is also really good! the only problem is that the grammar is a bit messed up at parts but its understandable. really liking this so far, author seems to have an idea of what hes doing, im in boi. this junior brother hopes senior brother will take the trouble of coming along on this journey with him!
you just had to have a dependent sister....is this a Chinese book or something??? love the concept but that one is a turn off for me *huh* what a shame
Whoa. Complex characters and backgrounds. A really well thought out setting too. I almost got too lost in the world. This is going to turn out really well, I can tell. Keep up the good work!
I enjoyed reading the first chapter and immediately decided to add this to my library. The writing quality and character description is really good. The same goes for world building. Fantasy and magic are not my cup of tea, but this is one book that has definitely held my attention. Good job, Tales_within_me !
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I am not one to be intrigued by game worlds or those stuff but the way you wrote this book was really simple and easy to understand .You have a vivid imagination of what you are writing and you display it very well.You also have the tendency to repeat words like in chapter 1, you kept in repeating MIND whereas you can interchange with the synonyms of mind.And this genre is not fantasy, it should sci-fi or another.
Author-san I loved your first work and I will ask something about this novel. Will there be a romance in it? Good work keep it up author ??
I like how they author explained the reasons for the protagonist overpowered abilities. Moreover, the fact that his sister held a far more overpowering trait than him made it good.It looked like the protagonist need to work harder so that he to avoid being surpassed by his sister, while the sister aside also think of working hard to improve herself wanting to surpass her brother.
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