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Nothing happens in the first 30 chapters. I'm not joking. Sure he gets his ability but the author spends so much time just galivanting and increasing word count that nothing happens. Just when you think he's going to start being a merchant he wastes more time at other things. Don't waste your stones.
A new genre, fresh concept, and interesting work. The author is very clear about his/her views on the world background. The characters were well developed.
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I Like Both Slow and Fast Story Development,and this Novel is OK for me.(sometime You just need read novel for fun Not Gaining knowledge)................................................................................................ ..........
I never really do reviews but this novel is amazing.
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I wanted this website to grow, and for me to grow with it, but it looks like that's not going to happen. With the lack of a schedule,lack of chapters and good books,the time it takes to upload new books(1 or more months). web novel does not even pick the books we want.. they will pick the books with less than four stars over the books nearly hitting 5... this goes to show that they do not care about the people, but more about the profit.
honestly pretty good so far, the writing and grammer is excellent. I'll keep reading cause it's got an interesting plot. it is going to be interesting how you balance real life/game time because people need to work and eat. if you go offline for a few hours then days will go by
All right so I honestly love the story as I love duel main character storys where we get TWO main characters for the price of one instead of some dumb male/female/AI System lead. For others looking at this and thinking is it good and do the tags correlate, uhhhh kinda? Theres a good bit of cultivation (basically what storys bout shocker) but I havent seen any R-18 or Harem stuff yet which I kinda apreciate. This story honestly feels like these two are kinda made for each other and other 3rd 4th and 5th wheel girl/guys just would be weird to me.
All in all real good cultivation story with lovely little protags who are probable psychopaths and we love them for it.
The only real weak point I can see in this story is the grammar (not that I am an expet). But that can easily be corrected and do not pose any real problem to the comprehension of the story.
The world background is unique enough but a bit too vague. It feels like some important informations about it are still hidden, living us "starving" for them. I do not know if this is intentional or not but it add some "addictive" sensation, keeping me hoocked to the world in general.
Character wise, I don’t really know how to rate them, because I read so many books, that nothing feel new apart from mentally unstable characters (and I don’t know how to feel about that) but I will give it a plus because the author is working hard to give them feel "human", unlike many novel were you are left wondering how people can still live in a world full of psychos.
The story feels a bit slow at some moment, and normal at others. I will give it a plus because it never feel too fast and I personally like that. I don’t know if the feeling of slowness is due to this "starved for information" one or because somtime it feel like there are less pages available to read than normal, but as it don’t really affect how I like this novel, it is only a small negative point.
Taht’s it for my review. I am not a professional and it is largely made from my perspective and as such is a little biased.
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quite interesting nd also I do love time travel with vr games in it so it's a good novel for me. So I really loved this one
I'm going to go all 3 star except for Character design
Saw this and I'm quite tired of this genre myself but decided to read it cuz most of them have atleast great comedy.
I'm dropping it but go ahead for those who want to read it, it's still decent atleast