The concept is interesting, the characters are unique, and the grammar is quite good. There are only slight issues with flow and repetitiveness that should resolve as the author gets into the swing of the story.
Great story, great potential, Its dark which is good for a villain novel, I think we're gonna see more of Zero doing the worst to survive, again good for a villain story, its also a Cultivation novel, but I'll be honest the start is good, but it's still too early to judge if it'll stay like that, but I'm trusting it will, keep up the good work Authoralso I hope the Author makes a Auxiliary Chapter of the power system. GJHope it gets even darker??.
The story it's is a very addicting one and it is very easy to read the entirety of the book in one go, but that is also where this books main problem lies. The author isn't really stably uploading and the chapters are not bad in length Id say around average so like 1500 word per, but don't quote me on that.However, this book is very much one you should read and I think most people would enjoy. Although the length of the book is somewhat short so far, it is one of quality.Happy Reading, Archivum
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Kenji said the answer while reading a book. "Hitler was defeated by the IAE group or Indonesia-America-England, this group succesed to capture Hitler.
The heart of true love...
*fluttering of pages*
I looked behind me. To the left of the brown door was a long shuttered window. Iwalked to it, stood in front of it, and turned around. In daylight, I thought, you could seeto the postoffice corner.
"Why were they put together?"
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It's a cool place and they say it gets colder
He replied ''Date''. But she didnot know him how could she go to date with a stranger. Whatever it was her fault that his clothes were damaged so must accept his proposal . As if he had guessed her mind, he introduced himself ''Liu Jianguo''. He took out her phone from her clothes and saved his number. Xiu Ying regained herself.When she was to exit the car,he pulled her and kissed on her forehead.At that time, a warmth feeling flow in her heart which she never felt after losing her brother and parents.She looked at him and smiled.Then she went out of car and returned back to the cafe without looking back.He looked at her back until her appearance disappeared.He slapped on his head,why couldn't he control his feelings when it came to her?She might had been scared and rejected him.However,he was so happy to see and hold her in his arms.He could still feel her warm and scent in his arms. After some time, he left.