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If you guys have any questions about the story, just ask because I'll try and answered them all....
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Writing Quality is good, does not cause a severe headache while reading.
Stability of Update was mentioned so it's perfect.
Story Developments is good as it does not go astray too much.
Character Design weird as ****... I know it's going to that BL route but... at least make a 'trap' well I guess it's the author's choice, but this was just my opinion.
World Background is okay? except for that lazy hospital 'XXX' term on the chapter one, I hate when I see those things, just name it I guess.
So yah, this novel here is okay. Do try it... I guess i'll continue reading it too
So interesting and waiting to read more~~~
I really love your story. It isn't the stereotype story of rebirth and there is alot of fluff that's a plus. I always wating for updates. I hope you keep up the good work.
moreeeeeeeeeeee episode ..................................,.
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I feel like the mc is getting green hatted every moment of the story, I also dislike how the taint breaks the mind of a women as it's a bit too dark for me, The mc and pretty much any female character gets raped or is close to getting raped almost constantly, It is to the point that when you see a new female character you begin to wonder whether she will be raped and then die, Simply raped and broken, Or just die, It gets kinda repetitive, Also it has only been a few days in hundreds of chapters yet it feels like they have gone through months of action, There is too much happening in too few days.
everyone saying mc is a beta despite him being less than 15makes me wonder if they have brains, also all the painful waiting is worth it by chapter 100 when the best part begins
Is this book reated to your other book ares god of war system ? I love it that one but I think I’ going to read this one to.
i really hope new chapters get released soon. i am very eager to read more of the story.
oh, this bul***** is still ongoing? a bul***** book where the mc can't even control his harem and just let one of them have her own harem but the mc ended up taking them all but those girls still in relationships? lol the funny thing is that, the author once repost this book but never fix that issue and the fact the even at chapter 800+ (where I stop reading this bul*****) still not solve is the most outrageous part.
There's so much potential in this novel! I'm not sure how to characterize it, butI'm confident that it will improve as the story goes on. Even though I've only read the first chapter, I have no doubt that the author will keep writing better chapters to make this book even better! Let's hope for a clever and enjoyable voyage!The first few chapters had a feeling of being about everyday life.