This is a really good story. so far I feel like it shows to some extent what some women go through with domestic violence and how things eventually, can turn around for the better for the survivor and worse for the abuser.
Really good book. A few grammatical mistakes but that can be forgiven. I’m sad there isn’t a book 2 though. ...
I made an account on Goodnovel for this book! totally worth it. I recommend this to everyone who loves a cute teenage romance!
Please update more chapters soon
Excellent as always.
Short but absolutely beautiful story!! Well written & so thankful for the epilogue to tie everything up! Amazing job author ?
This is another great read by Cooper. The storyline is solid and so is the layers or characters. Enjoy!!
I love it. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Grips you straight away, great read!
Nice story. Good flow and length.
To be honest, the early chapters were quite disappointing. They were below average. It's true that the main character (FL) treated the love interest (ML) harshly by ending things due to financial reasons. The logic that she'd seek revenge and make her friends look down because she was rejected seems flawed.
Initially, MC was quite kind to ML, so it's surprising how much they changed and decided to break up. There might be underlying reasons for their behavior.
I disliked how ML's friends treated MC at first, especially grabbing her collar. It didn't seem supportive or friendly. The ML's cold reaction also annoyed me. Despite MC saving him multiple times, they didn't owe each other anything.
Both MC and ML's reactions were understandable given the circumstances, but their attitudes were off. MC felt guilty, while ML seemed traumatized and irrational after being betrayed. While同情他, I also believed that friends should help each other, but their treatment of MC was unjust.
When they realized MC had most of the food, their priorities shifted. It frustrated me that MC didn't stand up for herself due to excessive guilt. She should focus on her feelings for ML, not concern herself with his friends.
MC's character seemed overly empathetic, and it felt manipulative at times. Just because she provided help and support, it didn't mean she owed them anything. It made the story feel forced and unconvincing, like an overused plot device.
As for the end-of-the-world scenario, their initial reaction to abandon MC was harsh, even if it was justified for revenge. It didn't take long for them to change their tune when they needed her resources. This inconsistency was frustrating.
ML took control of the situation, which was fair, but the dream manipulation felt manipulative too. I would've preferred if he sought understanding earlier, rather than relying on a dream revelation.
Overall, the initial writing felt amateurish, and it wasn't until later chapters that the concept started to make sense. While the friendship dynamics improved, I still didn't connect with them much. The original FL's development and eventual connection with two MLs was intriguing.
The dream sequence did pick up the pace, but I need to reach a point where MC isn't constantly fearful and guilty before giving a fair rating. Her conflicting statements grated on my nerves.
Until then, I'll hold off on a rating because I'm still in an angry state. I hope for a more balanced portrayal of MC in the future.
So far, I'm enjoying the narrative, but there's not enough content for me to really delve into or express strong opinions. The main character impresses with their adeptness at orchestrating things secretly, and their primary role is to assist their targets in each world to thrive.