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This novel is hilarous I love how he calls himself the immortal and acts like a boss I also like how people just think hes crazy I also like the fact that the system makes him do things that are funny as well I hope the author continues to update this and continues to make me laugh :D
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This nice but you should also add many more good shows like the one when ji mo stands up to a bully and so. And also this is extremely realistic in the world today . No cap
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It gets better from the 11th volume onwards.
Now this....this is a true breath of fresh air. I admit that as I slog through these endless stories plagued with writing I would be generous to call amateur, I have developed a certain preconception regarding the quality of stories available on this website. But this? This has truly humbled me. The writing is easily several leagues above most of the popular power fantasies that litter this site. The atmosphere and emotion depicted is crisp and to the point. Honestly, I would put the quality of writing over even most published paper-back young adult fiction. The transition to Henry Ortega's encounter with the apologetic killer was amazing. The closing paragraph of the prologue leaved me wanting more. Phenomenal work.
Thhe writer is very strategic. I totally can relate. For the story itself, i would say it is very well written for it is something everyone can relate to.
I, The Mighty Demon Lord, appear in this novel. So character design 25/5. So no need to give points for other clauses.I wish a calm mind to Elyon against the popularity this novel can have with using my existence.Have fun to all readers.
A good story so far with an interesting way of using the system genre. I like the use of the system only giving a basic step into mastering skills and then it is up to the MC to work hard to develop those skills.Not so much of a plot or world building so far but as it is only 6 chapters in you wouldn't expect there to be and hopefully it's a slow build up to learning about the rest of the "universe" instead of the MC learning everything about it in a "chance in counter".Alot that the author can do with this novel and it is just up to him/her to be as creative as he/she likes and take this novel in a direction that will keep the readers entertained.4 stars so far as its only 6 chapters in and the world building, character design and story development is only in its infant stages. Hopefully the story will develop well so it can get up to five stars.