Story and premise are good. However it feels impossible to develop characters without dialogue. Like, the 3rd person pov and 1st person pov writing style makes everything feel unnatural and disconnected as there is zero dialogue. 6/10, could be better.
The summary is killing me, like what is it supposed to make me understand? Help??
That's an incredible storyline! It's hard to believe how much it surpasses Sword Art Online in terms of depth and complexity. I'm hooked and can't wait to see what happens next! With each new chapter, it's clear that the stakes keep rising, and the characters' journeys are only just beginning. The concept of the Singularity and the philosophical underpinnings really set it apart, making it an unforgettable experience. Looking forward to more!
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This might seem a little early for a proper review, but let me just say this.
The writing quality is not good, there’s a bunch of mistakes, and some things seems random.
And I recommend you let AI check the spelling, and if you’re serious about everything I would rewrite the chapters (I learned that the hard way)
Either way, I hope you publish more often so you can improve yourself.
It's an intriguing story with well written
characters. I highly recommend it.
First of all this novel give what i want.... from bottom to the the peak....too op from below....i like that.....hahahaha....i dont know other reader....but from me...i like this story and background story....system too op...and not so fast in level up MC....so this story exciting....BTW i like all novel all about MC op from the start and with system....for example this novel....i hope you can come up with very exciting arc....and you can create new realm....so if MC conquer all realm and univers with his system....hahaha....i hope too you dont give up and can give more reader exciting novel....hahhahaha..thank you
If you are looking for a kingdom building novel that is realistic and similar to "release that witch", then go somewhere else but if your looking for a novel where every reader wants the MC to FVCKNG FAIL SO BAD because of his unreasonable, and stupid decision but still succeeded due to his Plot armor that's thicker than KING KONGS ANUS, then this is the novel for you....
Seriously, mc is sometimes a genius or stupid, kind or unreasonably ruthless, sometimes alpha or beta in females...
Makes you wonder if his bipolar or something.....
so far really good
This is one of the better books I have read. No rape, sexual abuse. It was entertaining as one experienced each character’s trials and emotions. The mate never rejected his mate. All the love stories were amazing.
This book is super underrated.. I could not stop reading ...
I am excited about new update it’s good so far thank you