The story is intriguing. The grammar needs to be checked. The pronouns are incorrect often .
l love the story
The first 5 chapters are well-written. thumbs up, Bright!
Good story but not enough closure. I agree with the other reader, there's a few open issues unresolved.
Great story but need more updates please
I have truly enjoyed this book! Can't believe we are nearing the end. Looking forward to more from the Author!
Great detailed story line!
Although I'll surpass the mc is very good,the only flaw tho was the writing which felt mediocre(I am sure the writing would have improved in the later chapters as I dropped at ch 100 bcz of the gender bender thing which bothered me a lot and I don't know even know why).
its done... did you read the last chapter?
Not till chp 150.
Not sure about later as well but he has two girls close to him.
The book's ending (epilogue) is rushed, not all narrative elements are resolved, and you are left with some unanswered issues, but it is still a satisfying read.
So true. So bad, it's good.