FantasyMan
I love this book already, and it only has 1 chapter, I love the way it hooks you the instant you start reading, and once you read it, you can’t stop, honestly it’s one of the best I’ve read(even tho it has 1 chapter, I still stand by my statement)
This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!
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HmmI am bad in English, so I am review with IndonesianBut I dont know to review, only read, read read, done, and waiting for new update ??
One of best books I have ever read please keep it up
Overall an am novel, only novel with an OP character that actually has a plot. I love it
okayish story but don't bother reading or paying after chapter 40, translation dropped down to earth, not much different than mtl.
I gave up on Chapter 15... So I can not say much to most points and as such I gave it the avarage of the other rankings, but... Why did I drop it?Because I felt like reading an essay from a grade-schooler. Sorry to say it this harsh, but explaining something with the same word in another sentance-composition or explaining self-explanatory circumstances plainly and simply... My head started to hurt.Perhaps I have just a bad day, but at least for now, this novel has nothing for me, to get going. Sorry.
Writing Quality:It's not too bad.Story Development:Filled with tropes that don't make sense, was literally mentioned a chapter ago that their family was rich and was basically the Kingpin of the area so why wouldn't they have bodyguards?I get the MC, he's feeling restless since his "body" is telling him to fight but I don't get why people would act that way towards him when they know for a fact that his days are numbered.Character Design:Aside from the MC, everyone is cut-outs.Updating Stability:Can't even rate that since this is on trial read.World Background:Won't rate it since it's only started
writing quality: Smooth reading with very few grammer mistakes.Story development: Well paced story however the direction is unclear giving a mysterious yet confusing feeling, leaving one curious.Character design: Characters are unique with in depth personal traits and quirks. Characters are described both physically and mentally.Updating stability: 1 chapter per day however it is I'll tril read World background: Mostly the school is what the plot js currently surrounded around. However, there are hints and facts proving or portraying the world as an alternate earth.
I've seen some CNs like this, but never a fantasy setting. I hope its good but the summary doesn't give me much hope. For all I know, it'll be Polygamy and so-called rejections will be irrelevant. If so then it's really stupid.
Really solid world building. The author has a strong command of English and has managed to bring together a compelling story. I just hope he posts more often
