The story was intriguing and very much interesting. The exchange of dialogues, together with the narration, were relatable and remarkable. Such a great start. Good job!
The plot twists in this book is to die for . just when you think that you've guessed the killer, the author just brings up another plot twist????I honestly thought Anthonia was the killer till Audrey died, now I'm so confused ??Author what's going on with Chapter 29-31, is it part of the plot twist I would honestly rate this book a good 9.5/10
Really enjoy the story. I have some minor gripes on characters feeling somewhat flat, but nothing major. My big complaint is that the writing is sloppy. At least as of 700 chapters in. Lots of broken sentences where a key word may be missing (“Alex is ____ a masochist” where the ___ indicates a missing ‘not’). It happens way too often.Also, the status screen dumps are frustrating. I don’t to see everything. Just hilight the changes instead of pasting the entire thing and then writing a paragraph about the changes. Overall I do enjoy this story though.
so far I'm enjoying the book. the plot is interesting
This was an amazing chapter, I really felt like I was there, like I could picture everything that you said. It was very well said and very well written, I cant wait to see what's next :)
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I like the writing and the plot. I find the use of parallel worlds quite interesting, one with magic and one without. Also, I just can't stay away from bl. Alas, the pacing of the story is a bit too slow. Since the story is going to be a long one, I can understand why. But without more chapters, I feel things are progressing at too slow of a pace. In other words, MOAR.
This is definitely an interesting read, the main story isn't anything insane, but the way it's told makes you quite interested in learning more about it. Definitely would suggest a read.
The synopsis of the story caught my attention because of what it described and the plot that the story of the novel has is very interesting. I recommend this story if you like science fiction stories. Keep it up, Author
*complaint*Poor update stability.And I need a mass release !!!Author san you have written a great novel with a fresh concept that is getting popular these days in the webnovel market.just give me chapters. A lot of them!thanks.
I really like this novel, it has solid background, great storyline just sometimes author forgot or completely ignore logic that comes in way to make mc OP. LITERALLY he totally neglect logics to make mc OP like - 1)how he can make potions at physic enrichment rank without a training or hard work and that are 10 times better than currently existing in that world( can't believe it). 10 times better are you kidding me, the world alredy has potions that are best from deity realm and he has 10 times better one(with cheap materials) and can make like nothing, let's say THE EMPYRIAN CHAOS IS from plane above the deity realm or strongest there even then it doesn't make sense why the hell did that entity (or his fellow cultivators almost of same realm) invest his time in the starting realm of cultivation and even that much that he make such heaven defying potions. F...u...c.........,.....,.............2) he just discover 13th SEAL with just a thought, he thought and poof.. he discover the 13th seal. All other characters or billions of trillions people in past and in present are what idiots or I am the one who is. And even THE GREATEST EMPYRIAN CHOS CAN MAKE THE STUPID POTION HEAVEN DEFYING BUT HE DON'T INVEST HIS TIME TO WORK ON 13TH SEAL WHICH I SUPPOSE IS FAR IMPORTANT THAN THAT FUCKING POTION AND TELL HIM THAT "BODY AND SOUL ARE SAME. AHHHHHHHHH......FUCK....no character development, I think he is more mature at start before he gets the bumbo jumbo his parents left behind, now he is like a arrogant **** who do messes with anyone without giving a thought about consequences. It's like the more story progresses the more he get arrogant