The story is very interesting. Just one chapter into your book and I'm already hooked. Another thing I also observed is that your writing quality is flawless. Will love to read more. Keep it up!
Really bad world setting if u have common sense then u will probably be dropping it around 1chapter into the novel honestly i tried 10chapters but in the end the Idiocracy keeps increasing
He come out of orphanage found metal door picks it and goes in !! like the heck which part of the MC's body can fit into a lock to pick it
Finds the fmc in cave put a cloth on her !! what ur undie ? you yourself ddont have proper clothes what u covering her with
walk a little and voila a big car - not locked - no owner in middle of jungle - no keys a 10yrs old who just a minute ago couldn't see it's window because of his own height - steals it - drives like a speedcar - wow u can't see window of car bcz of ur height but can drive it at hek of a speed
The story is good and interesting i would have continue to read if not of the quality of the writing, which obviously just translated straight from a translator with no editing done to it, which is not really a smart move.
I’m giving you a 2 star for now, if there is any improvement i will personally remove this review with a new one to review the improved one.
Good luck
the only disconcerting thing is that the translation/author (I don't know who write this way) continue calling purple jade 'it's and no her name or at least 'she' , 'her'
the story is very good for me, cant understand why there are some people with awful review.. but yeah every people had different taste on story though..
Btw buat aku belajar inggris dikit-dikit ambil kosa katanya :v thank you kak XD kudukung mumpung coin gratis XD
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It would be great if this is chosen. There is no better Urban novels nowadays and almost all of the chosen novels novels are eastern and scifi. It would be great if at least there will be Urban novel.
I don't think this is a slice of life, nor do I think it's any kind of power fantasy story. It just feels good to read; it's amusing at times, cats are present, it's very tranquil, and it feels nice to just read about a normal, average existence, especially considering what's going on around the world right now. It feels less like a story and more like a detached view on a completely normal and average world. I love Nocturne already, though what seems to be the FL seems kind of tropish to me. The story is slow, calm and completely normal; there is no conflict, little drive and ambition and makes me feel like I'm just popping into a world to admire the scenery. It's a great story, and I sincerely hope it gets picked up because I think I could use some normalcy in my life right now.
Amazingly well done!
I honestly reccomend this to people wanting to find a good read.
Great work author!
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The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber celled"Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subcribers. She was around 15.
Word Padding, has cliché's, and other reviews over hype it.
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