This romance novel fell flat for me on multiple levels. The characters lacked depth and development, making it difficult to connect with their supposed journey of love. The plot felt contrived and pre
Great book, I love it! This story has a lot of potential
this is interesting v✌️??✌️ just started reading and the storyline isn't so boring like most that I read so I like this book
Very good story! it hooked me to the first chapter, the story stelling is good, world building is also good, I recommend reading this if you're bored
A story involved not just with standard Isekai fare but actually contending and resolving the problems internal and external that the character may have because of their fantastical construction or convoluted relationships. This is explored by being more dark, gluttonous and lustful than some of PancakesWitch's other works and is all the better for it. Just don't expect to stay in one place too long, a time skip will quickly remedy any notion of a modernist daily life story being told.
i like your story and will continue to await all updates and i want to ask if you have any of novels like this one that you would recommend to me so i can read them just send me their names in a message
i haven't even read it but the absolute lack of grammar in the synopsis tells me how this story will be and i can see a disregard for grammar
If you want a good thriller and horror then this is for you! An interesting story in my opinion. I like how you write the scenes in every chapter. I like the characters too! Some things are in need of editing but it's just some minor errors that a reader can just ignore. Keep up the good work author!!! ??
to be honest, I dont really mind the grammar and im 12 chapters in. i also doubt he edited it because there are still typos. grammar isn't bad but the English is pretty elementary. now, the only thing i have a problem with is the character. see i don't actually have many problems with the mc as many authors write unlikable cringy edgy characters. I just hope that the mc will actual develop as the story progresses, and as im only 12 chapters in thats a big possibility. but while I'm here I do gotta point out how 2d these side characters are
All in all, it was a very interesting read, a really chaotic evil mc. Until Yura came into the picture and it completely broke the immersion for me, every time time she appears he acts completely out of character without her adding any value at all. I understand it might change later, but after a few times I couldn’t keep up the interest
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
I like the way your story is progressing but the mc seems a little ****** to me. Also are you still writing this ? ?????????????