King_of_Dezz_Nuts
Honestly terrible. There is no depth to characters so far. MC is just a face slappibg machine. All he does is slap faces and scheme. The face slaps are not executed particularly well either, and he doesnt seem to make the disciples in the lower plane. It seems like he already has them
Translation was good . Yes this Novel have a real translator . Novel's background was good and had potential . But Subpar writing turn it into waste. Too repetitive feels, MC character also feels too one dimensional and I am losing interest .
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I love this novel, The concept is very good. ..10/10 for plot and storyline It has very good character design and update stability ...Very well written,The writter doing very good job. [img=update]
A beautiful and Interesting read indeed.
i am liking he way story is in process .Just hop in u won't drop the book halfway.
Please give us more chapters
Personally, I am not a fan of reading horror stories but I think anyone who likes to read about gore and scary stories then this book might be right for you
It is an amazing novel .✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️I love the way they are for each other.
I'm only one chapter in, cause there's only one so far, but I figured I'd help the author a bit. So far, it's pretty good. I hope there will be more chapters, but if the quality of the chapters drops anyways I'll need to edit my review and give it less stars, so let's hope that doesn't happen. Keep the quality over the quantity. And keep up the (so far) good work.
The plot is nice, English and grammer, everything is in place. You should read this novel if you are interested in Master-disciple novels.
Really good has good plot with smart characters and the background Is not bad
I honestly liked this novel a lot, but the author has forced to nerf the mc since chapter 130 approximately. Being that the mc has battles constantly to acostumbrate at his power. reason is reasonable but after many battles, reason becomes stupid (My english is very bad)
