Unfortunately, this story is nothing like Long Live Summons. It is about a news editor who became a Void Traveler, traveled in the various worlds and absorbed the memories of other void travelers (the author tells the readers these in the first two chapters, so not a spoiler). Then he is summoned by a girl in a magic school, and the story starts from there as he solves her issues. I found the writing quite bland as the fantasy setting needs one to suspend disbelief, yet the author just tells things instead of showing how the events actually happen. It is readable, but nothing really stands out compared to other fantasy/ summoning novels.
very good, adequately sized chapters, interesting characters, story with no obvious clichés, no irrelevant chapters to fill, I'm looking forward to the next chapters
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Comenzó bien, la traducción es buena y da ganas de seguirla leyendo Yaque te atrapa con la historia y los personajes, unque parece que le están dando todo lo op al MC no lo es del todo ya que todo se lo gana con esfuerzo y en Dominio de Dios las oportunidades vienen con los riesgos
I have been following this novel since I first saw it in the evolution writing prompt discussion. I’ve been reading this for almost a month, so I feel its about time I give it a review. (Well, the real reason for this review is that I felt bad the novel’s rating went down a .1 star and the review didn't give any reasons or constructive criticism. As a result, I’m writing my first review)There are some grammar and spelling mistakes/typos. However, which free, original novel doesn't have those? The writing errors do not get in the way of reading the story.The novel is updated almost every day(I think about 6 times a week, but I'm not gonna bother checking), which is more than what I was expecting. The author has school work that she needs to prioritize and she never guaranteed daily updates(she just said she would try her best to upload a chapter if possible), so I believe this is very good.Honestly, I was expecting the story to be a bit generic after reading the synopsis, which I wouldn't mind. I like those other books with revenge/reincarnation or cultivating female leads. However, I was pleasantly surprised to find the story was actually quite unique. I guess I should have expected that when the synopsis mentioned the MC reincarnated as a white lotus. However, I was focusing on the revenge/reincarnation part of the synopsis. The story is progress quite smoothly. There isn't really any filler chapters. I have yet to feel anything was dragged out longer than it needed to be. I don't want to spoil, so I’ll just say you can expect some sweet stuff(not romance though).So far, I love the character designs and their interactions. Although the MC wants revenge, she is not one of the evil MCs who are ruthless to all. She feels very human. The changes to her character appear very natural to me. I’m looking forward to how her personality develops throughout the novel(please keep updating author). Also, I’m quite a fan of MCs who are good at acting.Not too much has been revealed of the world yet. However, that is to be expected. It's still early on in the novel, so unless you want info dumps, you should patiently wait for the author to gradually develop the world(which I’m hoping she will do).This review is keeping in mind that the novel is still just getting started. After the story has progressed some more, I may write another review if my opinions change. Please keep up the good work author.
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Soooo...because this is a rewrite and I have read the other version of this novel....and because I know this would be better then the original I shall grace you with a 5-star review thank me, later author.
Its been almost a year since i have read this so I have migh have forgetten some stuff.......But I think it was a pretty okay.Good for passing time..
I like reading on pet beasts and cheatcodes!! ? So hoping this book to be picked ?????????????????????????????
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this is very interesting, the concept of a story that is different from the others, good grooves can sometimes make smile sometimes make this amazing, I will always support your story