Although goose five did a fairly good job with immortal mortal, I'm really disappointed with this book.
It completely lacks direction, I can't relate with the plot or logic, the mc personality lacks depth and doesn't leave a lasting impression. The plot would have been great but it was rushed and there's still a lot of things to explain like, why do cultivators need planes, how come a sixteen year old is the greatest doctor in the entire kingdom. What kind of person expresses grief by ransacking is own corpse so wantonly and why would a rift just suddenly appear after a "rich" kid was digging herbs and found a rock which makes him get struck by lighting. IT JUST DOESN'T MAKE SENSE!!!!!!
I love the story, it's fun to read, if you have a few hours, I would recommend it.
If you want a good, the mc is exploiting the **** out of the game, kind of entertaiment. I can even add a little luck, to spice it up, this novel, but the potencial of this is story is a very strong 4,
I loved this! Reminded me of IRAS but has its differences. Please support it so they translate more! Can be stupid but good anyway so read it
Love the book so far. Little world knolage but that is understandable due to his circumstances. Do not let writing be a chore if you don't want to write then don't. Your readers will understand and if not that is their loss.
Hope this will continue.. More!
I dont do reviews but decided this book/novel was worth it since its so Well written and story progression is steady. I do wish for more chapter released daily but thats just me being greedy haha thanks for all the hard work so far and cant wait to see where this story goes and how far your willing to take it.
Its honestly one of if not the best r-18 novels I've read, period. The authors done a great job hitting all the turn ons without introducing any massive turn offs, aside from his lack of updates. It's been 26 days man
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Gotta rate, The story is good and been reading all the chapters for a single day, when’s the next update though.............................................................
great novel. deserves a lot more support than any other cliché novel, with silly MCs who think with their cocks.support +1
Not only webnovel thrashes decreased number of chapters from 60 to 40 and made 50% to be paid they translation are sh*t like worse than indonesian piece of sh*t cheap translators from before and now they use mtl ffs
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