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This story comes from the depth of my imagination. A tale I wanted to write for years but never got to. So please, help me along the way and support me with your heart!
As a fellow author it pains me to see that you have so many grammatical errors in your synopsis. Please get yourself a software to fix those mistakes
The novel is pretty good so far, amazing! It has a lot of action and suspense that makes the readers feel excited and nervous, even me. You describe the scenes vividly and creates a lot of tension and drama. The fights are well-written and show the different abilities and strategies of the characters.However:The novel has some grammatical and spelling errors that can distract the readers and affect the flow of the story. You should proofread and edit the chapters before publishing them or use a tool like Grammarly to check for mistakes if you want to...The novel has some inconsistencies and plot holes that can confuse the readers and create logical errors. For example, in chapter 2, Kage says he doesn’t know what level three is, but in chapter 3, he says he knows it’s a rumor. In chapter 4, Kage says he doesn’t know how to use his OGI, but in chapter 5, he uses it without any explanation. In chapter 6, Kage says he doesn’t know who Unknown is, but in chapter 7, he calls him his best friend. You should keep track of the details and events of the story and make sure they are consistent and coherent. (I'm not a pro or anything, just some advice.)But Overall, still good! The novel is an enjoyable and entertaining read that has a lot of strengths and possibilities. You have a creative imagination and a good sense of humor. The novel can appeal to fans of sci-fi and fantasy genres who like action-packed.
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The writing quality and update stability are really great, but everything else isn't. First of all, the world design. If the lowest tier orb gives 50 strength or some bs like that, why was the giant's strength a B-rank skill if low tier orbs drop like pinecones from a pine tree? Also, the infinite focus o
is total bull shît, and really doesn't work. I would understand if the mc had a ability that multiplies his focus by 10, 100 even, but infinite is too much. The mc went from 1-100 since the first chapter, and there really isn't any character development. The mc is a fücking coward and really dumb. Why would he sell skill books because they wasn't suiting the type of build he was doing? For example, the golem summon spell was just sold without an explantion. He isn't unkillable, and if a speed class rushes him while everything was down, he ded. The golem provides ample protection even when he disables the barrier, and will also stall the boss for him. Why did he use the giants strength skill book and sold the ice spikes? That giant strength book is the one that doesn't match your build, and who tf makes a 'build' in a apocaplyse setting? Wouldn't he keep every spell and orb and item since he is insanely conservative?
Translation issues aside (yuan dollars, jin kilograms), this novel is plain boring.
Writing quality: the novel is plagued with inconsistency: shark smell blood but then abandons pursuit when it lost sight of MC. It is also very hard to read due to translation of currencies issues leading to fishes costing millions of dollars ...
Story Development: the only thing to look forward to is MC getting stronger, there is no plot, no foreshadowing, we don't know how different the world is.
Character Design: There is only MC and MC has no design. Oh and every one is a millionnaire but MC is both a millionaire and poor.
Updating: not an issue given I'm dropping this in less than 10 chapters
World background: I think the author doesn't know either
I read this originally at Gravity Tales and loved every single part of this novel. The grammar, world building and story are top notch. You won't regret reading this.
A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US
This storys premise is delightful except for the fact that i have no idea what is going on or what anyone saying or what theyre doing. Kid gets abducted because some people said theyd guve his parents money and hes like “sure” doesnt question anything. Then when theyre explaining there objectives within the worlds the dont feel coherent. This feels like it might continue to be a prevalent issue and while I understand that english might not be your first language I cannot reccomend this in good conscience.
I kinda just clicked because I saw Kim dokja on the cover
... well played author well played. Well ima read it still and come back to the ratings after
The author is really talented, but it's almost been a month since the break that was supposed to last a week. In these types of situations, I would like an update on why this happened so I know if its dropped or not.