Its early yet but I like what I'm reading so far, the definition of purpose and wanting to fulfill that goal. The relationships that the ML has with his family namely the brother and grandfather. However after reading the 2nd chapter the reader needs to be clear as to who is the narrator, its only a little further the reader gets a bit of clarity. This story will remain in my library for now.
i love the story, and i am happy you update regularly. i like the character they have a good base and am looking forward to later chapter. i love how you added a mystery aspect. over all i would read tell the end.
Hello Everyone, finally here to right a self review.So here's what you should expect from the novel- Semi Game System(you will know what i mean after like 10 chaps), Dark Worlds (like don't expect it to be all goody good out their), Comedy,Romance, Monarchy system.As for the MC he is going to be total Bad Boy as we go down XD This is my first novel so please don't at all hesitate to criticize it, i love to learn from my mistakes.Also if you have any doubts please mention them here as it is easy to acknowledge them here.P.S- I am going to increase the chapter release soon.THANKS FOR READING, AUTHOR OUT !
tbh i still havent read the story .i was just drawn by the thick thighs ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Haven't read it yet, just the synopsis and your review, and it seems interesting, although i enjoyed your last work, the only problem that might be would be the grammar but it was readable so this should be too, so hey why the hell not 5 stars right ? ? Hope you'll write more, I'll start reading when it gets to 100 chaps or more, keep it up.
Easy peasy lemon squeezy it so cheesy its almost sleazy book review! great work, author, you make lots of basic typing/grammatical errors like repeat words or just the wrong word in the wrong spot, but besides these hiccups i love it.
The theme of cultivation being a side concept for the 'BL' world is an interesting find, and I think the novel will rake in the views and attention it deserves if the prioritization remains that way (so that cultivation doesn't waylay the BL romance)!Overall, the story is great. A characters possess the proper generic attributes dependent on their origin or race - humans possess clear, intrinsic or external flaws, similar to how spirits and demon characters have specific weaknesses or strengths. This is being portrayed nicely in the first four chapters, and outshines a good chunk of what you can find in Webnovel's archives.The only thing I would suggest during later revision is to check whether the tense is appropriate for smooth transitions between instances and actions. From my opinion, the wording scheme can be altered between instances from past to present instead of strictly adhering to a single attribute to add variety, but the method you employed worked as well!Good Work! This is definitely going into the library of someone who doesn't read BL novels!
Some good stuff, keep up the great work
Okay, let me clear things up. I am NOT Baisiwa. I only got the starting concept from him and the rest was mine. Besides, I am not asking for anything. I just wanted someone to read this novel I made and give it a fair judgement. I'm already happy and contented with that. I am not a professional author so don't expect so much from my novel. If you find some errors (of course, there would be a lot) please bear with this lowly being!
Really cool Story sounds awesome und i am Sure that it will be really great hope you have a good read on this Story lets hope the Translation keeps up and it dosent stop in the midle of the Story like man of the really good Storys here
One of the first novels I read. The plot is pretty typical looking back, but it didn't ween me off wuxia at the very least. Not sure how I would enjoy it now with a few other novels under my belt to compare it to, but I'm certainly not reading this beast again.