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u know I have always wondered why is that India has so many great literaturrs but we don't get to see any fantasy novel related to those. it's a very nice and new idea , I support you wholeheartedly, keep up the good work, thanks for this story
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 01/09/2021 @chap 211(released chap till date: 219)review divided in: Short reviewLong review with ratingsCC rants.ConclusionSHORT REVIEW: A slow paced SOLish where mc accepts disciples with some action & comedy.LONG REVIEW: writing: 9/10 Lil typo mistakes but not to the point where it hinders your reading experience... at least I didn't have any prob. update: 10+2/10 Yeah, deserves more than the max rating... For me 7 ch/week is must for full rating for any original novels and this one releases more than 7plot: 7/10 ^ Don't get me wrong for the low ratings... There is nothing wrong with the story... The world is being slowly introduced to us which is something I really enjoy^ the story is well connected and till now there is no plothole (nothing caught my eyes atleast.)^ But the low rating of this section is because author-chan it seems you forgot the title~ I mean *spoiler* it has been almost 150 chaps he din get any Disciple. *spoiler end* ^ the system hasn't been really explained... Tho it might be done in the future.. for now i dont have any ideaI mean till now I thought it's only related to disciples but suddenly we get different side missions *spoiler* about finding the core of the secret realm and then a survival quest.*spoiler end* ...characters: 8.5/10 Nothing bad... Most characters have their own quirk, but still characters could have been given a little more depth. Till now tho it's good.pacing: 9/10 ^ This is a slow paced novel. And it's really enjoyable reading this... ^ -1 maybe because i feel a little increase in pace would do good? Just my opiniondialogues: 9.5/10 Author did a good job here. People conversing here is one of the things most likeable about this novel.entertainment: 9/10 Welp this is a biased rating since it totally depends upon how much I enjoyed...Overall: 4.5/5 CC rants:-^ Well, first of all I should correct my previous review. This isn't similar to History's no. 1 founder in anyway..... This one leans more towards SOL compared to HN1F which is action packed.^ Secondly this is for ya author-chan~It's high time we have a disciple xD... ^ Also high time MC breakthrough next realm.... ^ This is for the readers... MC is little intelligent compared to other novels so you won't get irritated by his dumbness..^ And well... nothing else keep updating ?CONCLUSION:This is one of my weekly pastime... I just stack chaps to read it every weekend...And a must read if you're into SOL type novels...I'll say it once again; there is no romance, harem so to all suckers for this genre stay away... (I'm a sucker for harem and this is one of the few novels I'm reading which doesn't have harem)
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Reading this fills me with a nearly uncontrollable rage for some reason.
Besides that; The punctuation and grammar of the whole book is terrible. Its clear that they know to put a period at the end of a sentence but just typed this garbage out as fast as possible so no paragraph has a period at the end.
The dialogue is boring and the mission system is stupid. The person who reincarnated as Saitama is a dumb simp with no character development or personality.
I hate this book so much that my face grew too hot from anger so I had to go take a cold shower to not break anything.
Author, I want to kill you.
damm. This is a really beautiful novel that has a very light comedy tone. The author played the story very well from the first few chapters alone.
The other people might be annoyed by the system because it just exists for comedy purposes. The system is like a rebellious teenager.
That is just my first impression of this novel. Just great.
Not good. Very weird. Read it and see for yourself. The plot is strange and the writing is odd. We get a ton of system novels, but the premise of this one is just odd.
Really like this and dual cultivation hope u good health so you can write more. Keep it up author let gooo
Seems like it’ll be yandere, immediate 5 stars(-1 cause of the terrible TL quality recently), just praying it doesn’t randomly get westernised somewhere along the line
Good novel thus far have high hopes for it in the future keep up the good work
The book has an interesting start. It is well described and well structured world background.. Looking forward to be it in top 50. Well done author