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the story is very simple but interesting I just wonder does anyone know if this story is a Harem?
Sorry but dropping it early. The novel has a lot of fillers and it feels like the author is underestimating soccer players too much or the mc is just trash. First, the task given is 2km running, drink 2 litters, Spend 2 hours in the gym. The mc [author] created a loophole and not realizing it, just run 2km in the gym and gets double reward but nope. Also, a soccer player can run around 6 to 8.5 miles per game or 9.7km to 13km. I understand that the mc is a goalkeeper but 2km is ridiculously low for the mc to whine about how hard it is. Btw, I understand that the latter chapters may be better but not all reader willing to go through almost 20+ chapters of mediocre writing to get there. Anyway good luck.
No puedo dar una mejor calificación porque la historia solo va comenzando, si la historia continúa por mas tiempo volveré para editar mi calificación.
I finally found a novel that contains what I have searched for on this and other sites for over a year now: Realistic organized crime fiction.
I like the story even if it feels a bit fast paced. Especially when between later chapters (20-30) it sometimes feels like some scene that was supposed to be in between, was skipped.
Like it very much!
Would recommend!
9/10
looking forward to new chapters :)
It turned out great at the beginning, I had high hope for this to turn out into a masterpiece but I was wrong.
After the free chapters, the translation quality goes downhill, though if you read MTL novels daily then it is still better than that.
Also in less than 200 chapters, the story goes into the traditional Chinese cultivation.
Can someone tell me if it did not go into that direction in near future chapters? Though I doubt it because this is a Chinese translated novel
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WARNING!!!!!!!!
Harem at chapter 285
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So far the plot and pace are pretty good, I hope the story isn't rushed like in the old novel. If possible, make the MC's relationship with the current woman deeper first, before bringing up a new harem member.
This is a great novel. It has an awesome protagonist and and good side characters. Also, can anyone tell me if it's worth reading Villain cultivator? I'm aware that the the writing quality in the beginning is bad, but do I have to brace through it? Also, can anyone tell me the Fandom or wiki for Villain cultivator I can't seem to find it.
it's good. ... ...... .... ............
there is a reason why having the main character befriend the original cast is not popular at some point the mc stop feeling like one and start feeling more like a support character.
and honestly between all character traits the author picked the worst one and the least interesting.
i expected something better honestly this was a complete waste of time .
great beasts
great unique beasts
great story
great everything
Rated it 5 so people would read it. Great story, slow paced, just my cup of tea. But the translation is total garbage tho. It’s borderline MTL.
