Your grammar is mostly good. The sentence “...helped her country won the war.” Should be ‘win’ but it’s fine either way, English is a tough language, even native speakers of it make mistakes.
He walks near the alley and there, he found three guys, one of them is on their knees. Luckily for Reborn, he finally saw the man he was looking for, the thing that is just unfortunate to know, the man he was looking for was a bully.
"Shut up! You have no idea what you're talking about!" He yelled, sending a blade of ice shooting through the air towards her. Her hands shot up, bracing for impact. Nothing happened.
" that isn't too long. Good thing you can speed up everything, right?"
"Hm? Where is Hermione and her parents?" Harold asked.
"I understand now, so the real quest was to investigate the real culprit?"
I was tasked by my coworkers to buy coffee and donuts early this morning. They even gave me money for their desire beverage and donut of choice. Screen shooting their orders which were either simple while others were plain out difficult to memorise.
Up until that August day at Edna's in 2004, I'd stayed busy, living my version of a "good" Christian
"It will only take 2 hours." She scribble.
Até que ele não aguentou mais e procurou uma nova forma de se aliviar outros homens...
Continued..
Good luck! I just recently started out writing too!