I really hate when authors make the Mc mentally unstable for the sake of character development. I know as an author it seems clever and unique, but when you see this kind of trope so many times, as a reader it becomes annoying and obvious because you expect how the character is supposed to develop. When he was first transmigrated and decided to leave the dukes house instead of waitin to get disowned, it made him seem real decisive and mature but later on when he interacts with other characters or his actions he acts like a 13 year old. what makes readers want to read a novel is the premise of the story and first impression of the Mc. When you change that it’s almost like a smack in the face to us, when we thought we were getting a mature, decisive, witty, funny, and Chad Mc but what we get in turn is a whiney, mentally unstable 13 year old with a cringe system. IT RUINS THE CHARACTER. So even though we know he will grow it makes that process so much more annoying. In conclusion for a new author it’s a pretty good story and in the future I’m sure it will be a masterpiece, but as of right now it’s pretty mediocre. I hope his development won’t be a long drawn out process because it waste the readers time. Best of luck to the author ✍️ hope u keep writing?
I liked the premise of the story and the direction in which it was haeding, but after chapter 176, where he sleeps with the thot, it was ruined for me. I mean he just confessed his love for the nice girl like 2 chaps earlier he even called her his girlfriend. Also the author of this novel seemingly worships the dao of patriotism. But other than that, the translation is pretty good, chapters are put out regularly and story pacing was pretty ok. -> Story should include NTR and HAREM tags
Haha, It's from My broh Akkuzz so all five.
The story is fast paced. It has an excellent plot which gives background to the reader allowing them to get completely immersed in the unfolding story. It is quite an enjoyable read with pace that does not let up right from the beginning. Congratulations authoress.
Title: Thrilling Page-Turner! ??Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (5/5 stars)Wow, just wow! This book has me hooked from start to finish.The plot is a rollercoaster of emotions, and the characters are so relatable that I can't help but root for them. The twists and turns in the story keep me eagerly turning the pages.The author's writing style is top-notch, making it easy to immerse myself in this gripping tale. I can't put it down!If you're looking for a fantastic read, don't miss out on this one. It's a definite five-star gem!
Here I thought I had already written a review. I mean, even if I did, I'd not have much to say. This novel is just the best, period. The writing, the characters, their interactions are all so amazing and intriguing that it keeps drawing you in in. Well, and there's the father who left for milk... Although as of now, the stability of updates is a bit questionable, I'm willing to forgive the author for that. Overall, just an amazing novel.
Nice interesting story.
MC was a doctor before he died by being burned alive due many thought he was dead. So he was cremated (Alive)
Thus he goes to hell (Half-aware that he became an abnormal ghost with great strength) And then mysteriously came back to the world of living.
Before he disappeared he took a dead body over and gained a wife and was a son-in-law living with the wife's family.
Anyway, he owns a bookstore that after a while decided to only open at night? (Not sure)
Then somewhere in chapter 30 - 40 he encountered a hell-envoy. The hell envoy was probably tired of his job and thus entrusted (Albeit with a force) to the mc and the mc thus became an envoy of hell.
Translation quality: 5 star, nothing wrong with it.
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Stability of updates: 5 stars, can't say anything about it cuz trials.
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Story development: 4 stars, because of trials but it;s getting better.
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Character design: 5 stars, author did pay attention to the design and development even in the first 60 chapters (Although I read to ch 39)
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World background: 4 stars, there is somewhat revealed, but for now it's not enough for me to give 5 stars. (Within 39 chapters)
My favor goes to the side of destiny... oop**! Great start ark! Looking forward for more updates! (can't wait!) I added your story to my library to follow the progress of the main :D
So I'll just summarize everything here.
1. Remember to stick to only one tense. It takes practice, and I still make tense shifts by mistake.
2. Make characters consistent.
3. Learn the art of description-- telling and showing. There are lots of guides in the internet.
And above everything else!
Never stop writing! Just don't stop writing. Once you stop, you really won't improve, so Don't. Stop. Writing.
That's all~!
Translator of this work heavily relies on MTL. The chapter orders are messed up. It's go back and forth. the same rank are also differently translated. I hope the translator do his work probably.
Great read! I was truly surprised with the ending. This story is excellent to read on a long flight or during a relaxing weekend with a nIce glass of wine.
Very under rated story but actually very fun adventure and some of the chapers are so funny that i was laughing.
The MC is a good-for-nothing cultivator who is trying to romance his master. He is actually a god immortal character that is reincarnated into a good-for-nothing cultivator because his cultivation potential is suppressed.
Story is actually very deep and epic.