the book is very entertaining and loving...
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the story kept me hoked from the start, it is so well described, that i can imagine everything in front of my eyes, the author has done a good work in making every thing realistic.
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I think it looks interesting. Please update more chapters so that we can judge it accordingly. ?????????????? keep up the hard work im so thankful for sharing this storyyy to us. Arigatouuu
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Overall this is a lot of fun to read, if you enjoy sports novels then this is definitely for you. Its great seeing Izan develop as a player and move up the ranks at Valencia. Theres also a good family dynamic, they genuinely care about each other. Some of the great moments are when his mum gets chances to watch him perform in front of packed out stadiums and seeing how proud she is. Feels like the author is also genuine fan of football too, which you can tell as you read. There’s a couple spelling mistakes buts it’s really not a big deal, highly recommend checking this out!
the synopsis was pretty captivating and for those who love fantasy would have been a massive draw. the author is a good writer and knows how to flow well with words but reading the first few chapters I didn't exactly find what I was expecting...still trying to figure out how the first few chapters connect though(will probably find that out in the later chapters).the grammar was spot on and the author no doubt is a skilled writer.
Honestly! I smiled when i read the first line of the synopsis!Creative!I cant wait to read through and see whats its about all in all.A must read!
Wow, this is a great story! I love how you have mixed science fiction and horror in one story. I love stories with alien and this one is the best I've read so far! Nice job ?
I really feel good about it.l haven't read it completely, but I'm gonna love it even more than what I currently do. Keep going! We will support you!✨