Really tried to put up with it despite the issues, but I just can't. First the Cultivation is ridiculous, the MC just spends one chapter every so often and bam he skipped many levels in a short time to deal with the current issue, even the Dao comprehension part is just skipped as the MC just gets a rare resource that allowed him to comprehend the Dao automatically every now and then. I kid you not there was a fight against an arrogant young master in the starting small province of a sub-continent that took 5 chapters despite the fact that the MC can one shot the dude and the tournament took like another 10.
That is a smaller part of the next issue, the author loves going into detail about the most meaningless things but has no issue glossing over things that are important, do you want to read about the MC losing his V-card to his wife on the day they got married, in which they started dating the night before? Do you want to hear the background story of the Aunt who is arguably one of the most important characters and a harem candidate? Well to bad as you will get a fade to black. Even with important things that did get explained we had some fade to black stuff happen multiple times, like we got no less than 2 times where the circumstances of the MCs birth got interrupted by nothing before we are finally told, which feels like the author's failed attempt to create interest.
The Cultivation system is crude and not well explained or thought out, like there is a certain power that allows one to fight above their power level, but everyone can use it so everyone can theoretically fight above their level. I guess the most popular comparison I can think of is DBZ where power levels are impossible to properly measure but you can still tell if you're weaker or not. So don't expect cultivation realms to mean jack****.
The Earth bits should be thrown out as it is a complete dumpster fire. This story would have been at least a 3.5/5 if the earth stuff never existed tbh as it is somehow the absolute worst thing about this series.
i love this novel & mc but sadly the translate using MTL is not really good, i sometimes need times to try to understand it. i hope author can fix little bit before upload it
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Funny and interesting synopsis. Just give the book a try! Good luck to the author, hopefully, there will be consistent updates. All the best. <3
Great book + +
These reviews don't really make sense because the story is not yet complete, but this is my initial rate for the author to show my support.
Keep up the great work, and I hope that you can see this story through the end. Cheers!
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My attention is just caught on the title and synopsis honestly. Like "Doronavirus" bruh. Ahh...But I still read it and it was certainly different from what I expected. Its good work aside from me laughing for the titles and stuff so shall give a try to this one? ~
The story is creeping AF. My instinct feel terrifying by reading this story, Keep updating and never give up for the author! This is my comment about your story, Hope you like it.
The story is well described! Easily comprehensible and how the author explains words that might render some readers to open Google for definition? It's great!
Good job author! May you be electrocuted! I mean saluted by your readers! [img=recommend]
Looking interesting so far, a bit dissapointed she has no balls, but its fine, interesting concept, wonder if he will use knowledge from his past life to cure all those addicts.
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