Hi i am the author. My writing is bad and have a lot of other projects so bad updating stability. Thus, this book only has good story development and world background
Amazing novel! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more chapters to release! And don't keep us hanging, dear author! I read everything in one go, but can't wait now!
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
All in all very good. Doesn’t entirely focus on *** and even includes the POVs of some other characters besides the MC. Can’t wait for more.
this is just another Beast taming novel with the slight difference overall it's average nothing really stands out too much overall if you have nothing much to do you could read it. fortunately I at least read most of the chapters. very much dislike it when people don't even read the story but yet review it.
Great story ,not the mindset of a fantasy genre that is very simple : "fireball" or the complicated magic technique of magus world.
(This review has been made after I posted Chapter 315.)Hey there. It's been almost six months since I've started writing this novel, so I think it's about due time for me to give another review to this novel from my perspective. Of course, if you take a look at the latest reviews I've gotten, you'd see that a great portion of them say that MC acts incredibly cowardly and newbie-like for someone who has a lot of experience, with some of them even talking about how I rely on a certain phrase a lot of the time (the phrase in question is "could not help but").From this point onward, there's a possibility that I might spoil a few things about the story, which I would like to apologize in advance for. However, I'll still try my best to not spoil it.First and foremost, let me talk about my reliance on a few key phrases, with the most glaring one you'd find while reading the story is the counter for "could not help but" in the paragraph comments. Then again, there are a few other key phrases I tend to use as a crutch throughout the novel, but let me point out that English is not my first language.Aside from that, I've taken a great portion of the inputs you've given me, which I sincerely appreciate, and have varied my usage of words ever since. From Chapter 200 onwards, rarely has the "could not help but" phrase ever been used. But alas, reviews mentioning it still pop up, so I guess worrying about is useless in the end.Moving on from that, let's talk about the MC's personality at the beginning of the novel. Similar to the active change I've made towards the omission of the usage of certain phrases, I've also taken action towards changing the MC's personality outright at Chapter 115 into something that was more in line with what people expect from someone with a lot of experience.But once again, I still get reviews about how they don't like MC's personality at the beginning and how they call him multiple names under the sun. Believe me when I say I've already taken note of it and that I am planning to rewrite the beginning of the story once I graduate college (which would happen hopefully a few months after I post this review). I'm not oblivious towards MC's personality at the beginning, especially if I know why he acts like that in the first place.In the end, I just wanted to make this review to tell everyone who is reading and who is planning to read this novel a couple of things. For those who have read my novel up to the latest chapter and are continuing to read it, I thank you from the bottom of my heart.And for those who are planning to pick up the book from the title and the synopsis, just keep an open mind. It's part of the reason why I made at least 90 chapters of the novel free, after all. Of course, I'd like it if you get to around Chapter 115 at the very least, but I won't hold it against you if you don't.Once again, I would like to thank everyone who has given me support and constructive criticism of what I've been writing thus far, making me realize that I still have a lot to improve on. I hope you enjoy the journey the novel shall take you on.(This review shall be removed once the beginning of the story has been rewritten to fit the overall narrative better.)
So the book says complete but the synopses doesn’t match the book they don’t divorce or have a child???
You already know the end of the book but the author gives up before writing the ending. That's the sad fate of a plagiarized work, the farthest I've ever seen is the sixth generation of plagiarism. Generally the original story didn't do well either. It just showed a new strategy of being lazy in writing.
If you want a story with an Evil and scheming MC this story is for you. For the evil part you only have to read the first chapter to know that, but for the scheming part you need to read around 30 chapters. The reason I like this story is because the MC is smart and evil but it makes sense and the people around him are also smart. It is not like in other stories where they have “smart MC’s” but everyone around them is stupid. The only bad thing is that some interesting parts are skipped over (the war before his child is born).
I really hope this gets choosen because it is really the best one of this batch.I am sure Webnovel could earn more money through this story as people are more likely to purchase chapter for this one.Please give this novel a chance.
one of the worst i have read. reader says its a copy paste story, so? the original is also like this? ?????????????????????????????