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This is my first time reading a story like this.. Im started to love realistic fiction. I was to touched with the story, it makes my heat beats faster.. I love you mr author! Please add more chapter!
The story is a bit slow paced ,but I like the relation of the Mc and his brother , yeah you gotta like it too, it's like AOT a bit in the first.
The novel starts of slow but picks up the pace ,one of the things i didn't like in this novel of the character of the mc ,the mc is too paranoid and wants respect even when he had not shown half his capability, sometimes he lets someone live even after seeing one of his best technique and uses enemies tools without knowing consequences .
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In my opinion the mc is a push over. Xpxpxpxp
his an alright guy but his too sloppy I'm character design and has got no general background as far as I've seen
It’s story has a lot of potential and the author has definitely utilised it
I had only seen one chapter in MC sister got molested and barely escaped from getting raped. my heart can't continue reading this.
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My biggest worry is the MC just being a system slave. Also not very original
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Some face slapping is always expected in a Chinese novel, but this one is just too much. The plot moves from face-slap 1, to set background for face slaps 2, and 3 with some mildly random face slaps in the middle that will help set up face slap 5... it's just too much.
The novel follows a Pokemonish style where all the fighting and strength gathering is done by the pets, while the MC remains pretty useless 9so far). The MCs IQ being even lower than Ash's doesn't really help either.