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Intriguing, easy to read, 2 chapters updated everyday! My daily does of morning read❤️
Author here although not much of this novel has been posted yet if you are in any way interested i do encourage you to add to library since i will be taking a bit more time to carefully grasp the exact direction i want to go in, more chapters will be up soon but for now i need to make sure the potential of this novel isn't brought down by my over eagerness to update and advance the plot.
super story I was really able to see that what he was trying to
As someone who has read hundreds of novels on this platform, this one stands out. It’s plot and writing quality are exceptional. Good job.
this is how I'd rate my story now how about you go and rate it yourselves and you should know I am open to constructive criticism
this is about the struggle of the big business empires in Pakistan and their rising and downfall history and addressing all the circumstances behind it military establishment political landscape and the family's alliance and betrayal from the family members pushed into downfall .
It is a nice story for a first timer! It was a little boring during the first and your suspense writing can be improved but keep growing ? I believe in you and very soon many will.....BTW can't wait for the second chapter ?
The story is interesting so far but there is too much filler in the chapters. Also the chapters are short, so sometimes feels somewhat anoying having to read 7 chapters just for something that in 3 chapters could be done and it would be as good as doing in 7 chapters.Webnovel is not cheap for reading.Quality does not consist of oversaturating with details that do not interest.But as i say the story is interesting so good job and keep going, this just how it feels for me
So this is one of my favorite novels. The main character isn’t going to change, and he just does whatever he wants. He steadily gains strength, and gets women. Though after the school arc, they aren’t really the main focus of the story anymore. I like how he is OP no matter what, and just keeps getting better and better. He also has a background that can’t be messed with, so he isn’t targeted when he shows his strength. He doesn’t bother hiding that he is strong either. Honestly I don’t know how this hasn’t gotten contracted yet. Love the book.
the book is going on the way of becoming a masterpiece ....I request the author make it a peak level masterpiece for us....
I’m really enjoying this book. I like the character development and how well the action is moving. Complaints? None really it is pretty well written and edited. I’ve bought privilege because I love to binge read. My problem is I hate to wait but like I said that’s my problem. Thank you author!!
nahhhhhh ill drop this novel at chapter 100 ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
