Writing Quality: The writing quality is good overall, as I can understand it, but there are still some mistakes. I would rate it 4 stars. ⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development: I didn't enjoy the story development much, except for the moments when the main character (MC) used his brain towards the end. That part was good. I would rate the story development 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐Characters: Unfortunately, I don't like the MC. I found him to be unintelligent, to the point where it frustrated me. It bothered me how easily he allowed others to see him as weak. Although there were some instances where he regained his strength, they were infrequent. Overall, the character development was not satisfactory, and I would rate it 2 stars. ⭐⭐World Background: The world background has some details, but it often lacks sufficient descriptions. For example, the author uses generic names like "ruin city" without providing enough specific details to fully imagine it. I would rate the world background 3 stars. ⭐⭐⭐Updating Stability: The updating stability is excellent, earning it a 5-star rating. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Evaluation: The story has potential, but the MC's development is a major drawback. It took too long for him to start using his brain effectively, and expecting readers to wait for over 50 chapters for that moment is frustrating. I hope the author considers improving the MC's character earlier in the story.(Note to the author: Please consider this review as constructive feedback. It took me 10 minutes to write, and I hope you take it to heart.)
I will short out all the things in volume 2 , but first in vol1 we will be focusing on Romance. In volume 2 we will be focusing on mainly in counter attack, action, adventure, so the manipulation things if you didn't understand in volume 1 I will summarise it in vol 2.?
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Ha what a pity... you who had to make other men harness the power of the mc? Well I can't tolerate chapter 29, I always leave my moral concepts behind when I read fantasy stories because it's basically another reality, but the things I can't swallow... maybe if the guys were at least the women's husbands I could try not to call, but that's too much. It was good, but not so much.
The beginning was badly executed. I wanted to drop this due to the frustration but it does quickly get better and got readers hooked. If you read 'Yankee Wa Isekai De Seirei Ni' in a way it's similar but instead of a pipe, it's a shovel.
--The script changes. Every Arc doesn't connect, clearly not a well-thought story.
--His abilities weren't well explored or explained.
This could had surpassed Trash Of The Count Family if it was rewritten and polished.
--I love the MC eccentric personality. He just does things on a whim not caring about the consequences but still super-effective lol. I hate how some characters were discarded but at least Gril and former Count followed him.
---The characters that come up feel real though do need work
---*I really hope there's Romance with the 'Main Heroine'. Honestly although MC is compatible with Alice, you can tell she's into the elder brother (not really well written) I still prefer Charlotte the best though!
Yes, this story has a lot of flaws but it's fun to read. I still want to see this Translated as it's been on hold on NU for a long time and I'd like to get this story over with. Honestly, I couldn't think of more pros to add lol
I love this book. Please update at least once every week or, 2 or 3 days, or even daily.<3
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The more chapters I read, I became more invested. I feel sorry for the male progonist - after everything he’d done for his old world
The progress of the story is great and I have no problems about it. Can't wait for updates. It's not a harem which is good or bad, depends on your taste. The only problem I have is that it's sooooo addicting to read and it's not complete.
Message to Author:
I really hope there's a romance in this in story in the future, cause pure action/adventure is lonely....really lonely like some other novels where MC with no love interest, stories ending with MC dying or farming. Author-san I shall return in months to see the progress.
I have never been into this kind of stories before so I thought that I would leave it hanging from the first chapter but once I started reading it, I was proved wrong. To put it simply, this book was very interesting and.. original! It was well thought of. The character design, the story development and all the other details screamed 'Get hooked on me!'
So, hats off to our talented author!
ooooh this is a different approach! I like it! I have to search the word Bokken, and it amazed me! (Japanese wooden sword used for training in kenjutsu, for all the readers who are stopping by at the review section) anywaay, I really love the concept here! You should add more tags to attract more readers! Thats all I can say for now. Good job, author!