So far... the story is quite interesting. Although the writing concept is quite confusing because several chapters that show dialogue and lines seem a little messy. Apart from that, it's been good. In fact, I also found the impression of the storyline which felt like a hidden mystery. Keep practicing, author!
The premise is interesting but the actual story is garbage. MC doesn't just have (almost) unlimited mana, he's also the best at using every skill of every class. This is the case at the start of the story, so there isn't much strength progression, but there isn't much conflict either, other than some faceslapping. All in all, it's like "Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse", but worse in every way.
man.... I feel that the mc is very passive when it comes to women and he is also so disinterested in the world that it gets boring, and there was almost no character development in these 50 chapters, his only development was when he saw thousands of women in franssi from the devil's curse but then there was no character development and he doesn't take matters from life to death seriously, like he walks into a den full of powerful monsters like he's walking in an amusement park, even though he's in the early stages of cultivation that's not good at all it's so boring I'm here to see how far he will change his passive behavior and character development
The storyline and characters of this novel are really good, I am looking forward for the character development of MC and heroines and the future plots and challenges. I recommend you all to read this novel.
I was enjoying myself, but then the story started getting rather long-winded. With this and the ****ty 'let's hear how the bystanders doubt the mc' meme, I'm just about done with this story. Thanks but no thanks, I decided I don't need this story anywhere near me. If you want examples, I'm too tired rn to give them, just read the first ~20 chapters if you haven't already and you'll notice it too.
My review of the novel (so that QI can't censor this review for "no review content"). This novel is one of my favorite novels, great MC, great story, great humor.
***TRANSLATION STOLEN FROM WUXIAWORLD. DON'T READ HERE. GO TO WUXIAWORLD***
Everytime Qidian tries to censor me, I'm just gonna come back stronger, so fu qidian for trying to censor the truth. I'm pissed that QI would dare dirty this novel with their pathetic schemes and disgusting moves. They stole the translations from WW (as is plenty obvious now lol). I'm insulted and incensed that they would think us readers were stupid enough to believe them saying that they reached an agreement with wuxiaworld. I hope us readers can band together against this bs QI.
Keep censoring me QI, I'll be back stronger t(-.-)
Writing Quality is pretty bad. A lot of the same words are used in the same paragraph to continue the sentences. For ex 'then'. Sentencing is not ended where it's suppose to end instead it's keep going so it gets a little bit of confusing.
Story development is liked by me so far. Just so people know, I have only read 19 chapters so far because of premium so this review will be updated once I slowly catch up in the future. Everything else is pretty good.
I dont care if you hate qidian or anything, but please dont mess up with the novel rating.. This actually a really good novel and your hate for qidian is nothing to do with this novel.
the story goes too fast for my taste, like the MC who kisses his ex-girlfriend as soon as they meet (not enough development of their relationship in the new timeline). Not enough explanation on the length of time that the MC play from the beginning, to be able to have a point of reference. But the theme of the story I love it since they look like legendary mechanic but from the point of view of a player. In addition you added a difficulty mode which is new in my opinion or if it does not succeed their account is deleted.
gives me terror infinity vibes (dude gets teleported into different scenarios) but his golden finger is his proficiency panel. also the synopsis is lying when it says he learns basic swordsmanship instantly, he had to train for a month so at least he aint a genius.
*spoiler*
the annoying rich guy gets killed.
Why does wbenovel keep recommending this horrible garbage? There is tons of racism, a stupid mc and grammar that might as well be worse than MTL…
Hello, Author here.
I do now know why I am here. I must be possessed. However, If you have any questions, you can ask them below and I will try my best to answer them (without any spoilers).