Pietys
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it's sooo boring. I mean other then unwanted info dumps and fillers there is nothing in this.
Dont think anything else and just click the like button. Im a ****** man i saw/read erotic scenes,harem romance i press like.. So are you?
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This is good ??? so far.So please don't mess this webnovel up.Also is this harem or romance if it isn't any of the two that's great.But if you have one in mind please choose romance pls.As I REALLY HATE HAREMS.
To early to give this more stars but like the author previous work. And with just 20 pages read I found the story to be engaging. I would like to read more about this story.
The story is been amazing thus the rating. Sadly, it got locked behind premium. I used spirit stones to keep unlocking for awhile, even to buying some using cash just to continue reading. Furthermore it’s 8 stones instead of 4/ads on other novels. Additionally it’s roughly 15 pages on handphone app, but others goes to 20+ each chapter and doesn’t do this (Be reminded the pages are in handphone app.) But, at the rate this is going I think I will only have to buy more and more. Thus I’m sorry and am going to let this go. Behind 30+ locked chapters and counting. With regards,An extremely disappointed reader.
SPOILERS AHEAD! My thoughts after finishing the whole novel (421 chapters + epilogue of about 10 chapters). The author was a newbie and this is his first novel (from raw notes, his other newer novels are: "I just want to be killed by everyone" and "I am really a perless expert"). Suprisingly a very charming novel in its own way. Definitely sets a different mood than all other novels from this genre. It was so interesting that I went for MTL. The fights and reactions get a lil repetitive in the last 100 chapters, but this novel is not about elaborate plot. Some might say there is no suspense as MC is invincible, but I actually liked how the story focused on fleshing out his personality and making the story a kind of sightseeing tour for MC. At first he was a wine lover and a foodie (his disciple inherited these traits), too lazy to bother with other forces, people etc, he preferred to be left alone, drinking wine and cooking some food, viewing nature and sleeping like a mortal (it's later explained that the first days after transmigration had a hand in shaping his personality). But then he started agreeing to do some tasks for his senior brother who was the leader of sect (the sect took him in when he just transmigrated and they took care of him) and so he started to take liking to going out, he became kind of curious child and found staying in his previous place for longer time boring. His sightseeing tour began, we could follow him and witness all these other areas, borders, voids, planets, domains, universes, higher realms, god continents and their struggles. He also acts as a kind of protector, casually setting e.g. protective barrier for his main world, isolating it from outside, so that it doesn't get invaded. They didn't have contact with other planes, voids, universes, higher realms anyway, because the world was low-tier. As for his hobbies, at the end of the main chapters, he developed a new hobby, which was singing. In epilogue, 100 years later, he still had this hobby, even his daughter thought he's just a drunk father who was married by her powerful mother because he looked handsome and his singing was nice to listen to. He doesn't go for harem. He ends up with one girl, and subtly rejects two others - everything somewhere in the last 15 chapters. The girl he ended up with was not surprising, I mean can it get any more obvious, she started to learn how to cook somewhere in the middle of the novel and later cooked food for him & visited him often, besides she appeared quite early on in the novel, but it was only MC seeing her on some sects meeting. Later he saved her life a couple of times, took her for a tour to the central continent, gave her beauty a compliment and so on. He actually didn't really have love feelings to other girls. His disciple is like his child, another one he views as little sister, and there's other one that is his sword. As for the last girl, he didn't meet her that often other than one arc so he didn't even notice she had feelings for him. As for the ending, well, it's actually not ridiculous as in most chinese novels. The ending isn't cut with vague lines, he doesn't end up ruling whole universe or waking up from a dream. Don't worry. The author even adds about 10 chapters of epilogue to show us what is going on 100 years later :) The author tied things up without rushing. Do I recommend reading it? Yeah, I guess. Not a masterpiece, but I liked this change of pace. "Xianxia: My Junior Sisters are all Villains
Cant wait for more and this amazing world just keeps getting better every time a new chapter drops he can't wait to see what's coming next... the story has drama humor action adventure learning and growth it's pretty well edited and overall it's easy to enjoy the characters what more can you ask for in a book
I have been mostly enjoying the story. I have quite an ability to suspend disbelief and just go along with the flow of a story. I like the characters, the backstories and families. But the writing is killing me. Since I started reading web novels, I have gradually acquired the ability to ignore typos and poor grammar to a large extent, but since stories magically turn into three-dimensional movies or holograms in my head, I have great difficulty with behavior of characters that seems preposterous or caricaturish (if that is a word.) They kick me out of my 3D movie and remind me that this is just words. The main character laughs and chuckles every second time he opens his mouth, frequently described as "lowly"." To quote Inigo Montoya, "You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means." Lowly = of humble or base birth. It has nothing to do with sound volume. Also people sigh, loudly, frequently. In real life people sigh because they are frustrated, disappointed, depressed or really tired, and it's considered rude or a comment. One character laughs then sighs two seconds later. Another sighs, chuckling. Try doing that. It's not possible. The worst one is the use of the word "softly" with just about every smile in the first 20 chapters. Softly implies intimacy. Smiling softly is something you would do during a touching moment with a loved one, or while looking down at your newborn baby. It's not something a stranger does to someone they meet the first time for an interview. Reading the softly smiling over and over again gave me the creeps, like I'm reading about a serial killer softly smiling at the knife he just used to slice the throat of his latest victim, or fondling the organ he removed as a trophy. Yuck!!!! Author, please learn the many different types of smiles, and that the only time people laugh so much when they interact with others is when they're nervous, flirting, or are Santa Claus, paid to say ho ho ho. If you could remove the strange emoting the characters are doing, I'm sure I could spend most of my time enjoying my 3D movie of your story. I suggest you do some people watching. For instance, you don't talk about hand gestures at all. A lot of people talk with their hands. They also fiddle with their hair, and touch things and people around them. You also don't mention body language at all. I don't mean that you have to add all of those at the same time, just sprinkling in a little of all of them at different times brings characters to life.
Great story overall as Ch. 435My only concern is lack of communication from the author. Seems like he only responds on Discord but as he hasn't dropped a link in a while its hard to verify. Which is fine, readers don't really need daily comments from Authors. Where it becomes a problem is when they go from twice a day releases to one every couple months for a year straight without notice while maintaining the same privilege pricing. A little research reveals he has been updating every Ch from the beginning for the last year. Which is great for new readers, but without any word from the Author there is no way to know if any major plot points were changed and if its worth it to reread the story.It appears to be back to a Ch a day but its to soon to tell.Please respond and clarify Author ?
this is a great story if you are into a more complex, metaphysical world. Many times you don't know exactly what is happening but the author does it in way that you don't mind.
