I see potential in ur novel , the chapters are flawless , Less words , but better setting and writing , MC's personality is a bit interesting , I'll wait for daily updates , And hope you'll continue on the same path
Hi guys! Let me know if you want me to continue this book or not. Thank you for the support guys! ❤️
Interesting story, But you should develop the characters a little more. But I have enjoyed it so far.
So far the story is great, writing is organized and I’m loving the world building of the story!
Everything is excellently thought of and writtenwell done
Hello friends on Webnovel. This is the second work of Cook and it's amazing so far. It has an interesting premise, impeccable grammar, an understandable protagonist, logical and hilarious developments and much more. I highly recommend this for those who love stories with Towers/dungeons, numerical power systems, skill based systems, and much more. We have a top tier story on our hands.
???? no plot armour/plot holes, realistic characters, cleanly written, smooth progress which makes the story naturally pleasing and comfortable read, and mostly great and well made? characters with their natural development which makes you attach, sympathise and understanding towards their progress, action, death etc....
To be honest this Is a really great story ❤
Good book. Good concept. Transmigration and mind reading. Enemy to love. I won't regret reading it.
Alright this is actually a decent fanfic. No system, no ludicrous wish fulfilment nonsense.There are a few flaws though. The first is that you obviously do not proofread. The second is that your attention to standard writing rules is half assed : You do not start your sentences with capitals, you write numbers with symbols instead of letters. Lastly, sometimes it gets a little too much with other’s reaction of the main character deeds. Many times I have found myself half sighing/cringing when I read Hiruzen thinking "how is he this good oh my god ??". No. He is Hiruzen Sarutobi, he has seen Jounin level seven year-old before and all kind of prodigees through his decades of kagedom. Get that fixed, and your story will level up in quality greatly. I wish you the best !
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Great book, and Arthur is so optimistic that he actually has such fast growth, since he has info from reading it. Also, thanks for releasing more chapters if you mis some days. :) Also, he learns so fast he ends up defeating a griffin and elder dark treat so fast! He even surpasses Ren. :o