I love this book so much but why can't it be completed at once so we can purchase everything at once? I don't like the every day update when I want to read it all at the same time. apart from this, I love the book so much
6 chapters in, i like the story. idk what will be the progression but it's pretty fine atm. i just hope the author won't drop it.
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It's about a fat MC that ogles at females and can't keep his hands to himself. He apparently saves some girl in the freaking 2nd chapter. So much for plot development.
This novel sounds so cliche, sigh I hope it won’t be a disappointment. Guys pray to the potato god
Guess I shouldn’t have expected much after reading your last novel. You seem to project your loser personality into your MC’s. Neither of them are the strong ones in the relationship.
good novel
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Timeline is all over the place, one moment hes core formation and now hes regressed to foundation establishment. Also, some things are just wholly unexplained, with bad translations on top of that
Ok, so the thing u have to understand about this novel is that the first 20 chapters suck balls. Yes, yes i know, why a 4? because the rest a quite good, some even excellent. The real reason the start is so bad is due to the lack of any back story, character building or world building; u basically know nothing except for the fact that the MC reincarnated, and he was a super strong dude b4 that, THE END. After that however the action, the plot and all the characters get better, more complex. All and all, if u can survive the boredom of the first few dozen chapters, ull find is a great read.
Nice theme, interesting Mc, refreshin change from the typical fantasy vrmmo . Excited to see this play out!!
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This a great novel that stays away from cliches and yet still keeps its charm. Our MC isn't a typical transmigrator that gets the world handed to him through some cheat. There is actual character growth you see a boy from a civilized world adjust to his new circumstances becoming a man in the process. There is not that much action at the start but for good reasons. All I can say is I look forward to the story and so should you.
Good read nice story keep it up with your good work appreciate you for your every chapters hope you will keep updating the novel overall thanks for your hard work.