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I have read the latest chapter and to be honest, I don't understand at all.MC is nothing special and none of the characters are well described, events happen randomly and MC gets random buffs from the gods.I hope the novel will be better in the future.
This is a copy of another novel that has hundreds of chapters he’s just uploding them slowl….….…….….….….…….….….….…….….….….…….….….….…….….….….…….….
Its good. I like the characters so far. I personally like stories where mc is a movie actor because I like reading about the films’ stories since they’re like most synopsis—short, but interesting.
However, there are many pronoun mixups some make me uncertain who the pronoun refers to because if it is true it seems out of character.
Other than that, so far the synopsis gives a pretty good idea what the story is going to be about.
I honestly like this novel but this should be a magic/cultivation novel but MC is using Guns instead of trying to learn his abilities, he has all these tools but literally never uses them.
Also, there are places in the novel where the chapter ends and you think alright ill get an answer to that sentence or question in the next chapter but no not at all it's like things are forgotten.
Otherwise, I could see this as a great novel, we have an okay mc, bombshell waifu, magic/cultivation, action, tragedy.
The translation is a bit iffy, words change every few chapters. But, the whole novel is centred around comedy. The system and the levelling up is not the focus of this novel, if you were looking for some system focused novel, then this is not for you. The hilarious scenarios and the weird aspect is what got me hooked. If you just ignore the system words that change every now and then, it's a good comedy novel.
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I quite like it. And it's original so props to you. .
The writing of the author suggests that he is a 30 year old vir*in who is using this book as a platform to release his se*ual fantasy thus destroying the story line. As seen by the first 40 chapters the book is more than 1/4th po*n
This was so sweet! My heart melted at many moments and Ayesha's enigmatic yet genuinely nice personality is a perfect example of commendable character writing. Marco's reactions to certain situations was highly relatable and realistic, making the reader feel connected to the MC, ultimately creating an enjoyable story.
Obviously, the credit goes to the beautiful writing. The description was out of this world and the scene development was undeniably great; as a reader, I felt true fear, suspense and chills in many of the circumstances faced by the characters, and that goes to show just how good this was. Overall, I loved it ❤️
Summed up in one word (jk, it's two words): HIGHLY PRAISE-WORTHY
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Well, I personally enjoy the novel as it does not lean too much on the typical tropes so far, there are some but not much. There is also how the MC is not a typical protagonist as the author does something different.
I do not want to spoil it, so just give it a read
