It is a shame. This book was a victim of the changeover in voting system, and was purged for some unknown reason. I really enjoyed the world building. Please bring this back!
This is so funny and interesting from chap 1 to 7 i just read is worth reading??Love the MC and also that chit chat of system with others. Very Happy to Read this. Aurhor You did a Good Job ??? Will be waiting for you then ??
Extremely clicheed Plot and characters nothing Special about it character suddenly Out of nowhere gets rich without doing anything for it or having any risk involved.
Hiya, DemonLordie here! The author of PinD~!The story unfolds with the appearance of a single man, Isozaki Izumi, but processed quickly as his death came faster than chapter 3.Discovering his body was another man, Hoga Yasahiro, but when he came across it, what he saw was unexplained and made no actual sense!?But that was only the beginning! It's a story where every person's ambitions collide with another, a heartwarming stories with heartbreaking conclusions, new meetings and new discoveries, people haunted by past, people pressured by the future, people that have important others in their life that weight them down, and more tragedies to unfold. With burdens and life-challenging choices, people who departed and people who came into their lives, follow the abnormal adventure they encountered and enjoy :)
It’s interesting so far. There were a few grammar issues that were noticeable in chapters 3-5 that you could improve. Other than that the story progresses nicely. I’m more of a romance reader but I still enjoyed reading this novel. The chapters are short but feel right to the point. Good job and keep improving and it’ll be even better.
Very interesting story with amazing characters, love the story so far can't wait to find out what will happen when she finally exposes her true identity as fu jiu and spade z this is one of the best stories I have read so far I really really love it sooo sooo cute
The quality of writing although not the best it makes it up with daily updates. The story although not too deep and unique (as of chapter 9) we have a goal and a basic idea of the world [ better than an average webnovel ]. All said and done I’d say it has great potential and is slowly moving towards its peak.
All i have to say is... Perfectly dark.Because it said review too short
This story would be an absolute gem if the author kept the story in third person. using dialogue between characters for character and plot development. Needs a proofreader and editor to help fix grammar writing style consistency .
Why, you may ask? Because its the only fanfiction of RSSG compared to other story that are dropped, and it is a transmigration one, especially on the main character, :D (Hopefully there would be more) which i like, pls moar chaptah author. Anyways it's pretty good so far, i expect him, the main character to have more potential almost like a mutated monster, (in the story he at least gets a potion from the system that upgrades his body talent to mutated or close to mutated monster. Good luck man :) and be safe. ?
It's not a bad book. Development is slow. The world is well described.
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