Yu lixue story is so heartbreaking and with 3 chapters in you can feel her pain and resolve to get her Justice for her past life There’s something dark about Mo Ran hope that he will be a good ally for Lixue
Please, update the story immediately. I'm getting old here?
Good JobI Like itStory and Characters
Ahhh...the feels dude, the feels, aside from the yandereness and the fantastic plot, there were some parts that really made my eyes a little wet not gonna lie. Keep it up author and thank you for the novel it made me realize something in my real life too.. THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART.
I am a Harry Potter Enthusiast, so due to interest, I have searched fan-fictions related to Harry Potter.And came across this one.After reading this, I found the start of this fan fiction very interesting and I hope more chapters come soon!
Writing quality isn't bad, but after many chapters where the author repeats paragraphs sometimes even twice in the same chapter is questionable as it is frequent even withing first 70 chapters. I will admit author does a good job with gender pronouns so that is a plus. Character development is lack luster as author makes the MC ask the blatantly obvious stupid question like a child so they can explain something easy to understand. (my example "That is a jumping frog". "what is that?" "it is a frog that jumps". All it takes is a few sentences written differently to add IQ points to the MC.. CH 70 - 71 this is painfully demonstrated.This causes the story development to just degrade any confidence in the MC.
So far so good, really interesting and I love the author writing style
It’s a great concept and novel and stuff, but imo, the grammar kind of ruins the immersion. It’s not actually that bad compared to some novels but I’m just saying.
I’m 105 chapter’s In and omg ? jks has done it again. I’m hooked on his phonics, hook, line and sinker. ?His editor Devils_Advocate is well a devil’s advocate ? ? ?. The suspense Is Terrible. Jks is a master of suspense. I hope it will last. Because I will be here until the end of this story too. ?
Nicely done????. More chapters please‼️‼️
"Mr. Dark contacted you, sir," Lilith answered.
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