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I dont usually read that kind of book but i got recommend by someone but it surprised me this type of book is interesting and what makes it so good is te writing it is very well done i can feel the action yes it may be so small but its a very well written book keep it up
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Welp, the first chapter was intense enough as it is. He had done so much for the world yet as he is supposed to have met his end, a new and much dangerous world awaited him.Anyhows, I could somehow connect Stain and the Octopus teacher from Assasination classroom to the MC.Octopus teacher because of his Top Assassin origin story while Stain due to hid extreme ways of purging the stains of the world.
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I really liked how there was the essence of everything I liked, just needed a couple more details to paint the environment(like when they were on the lump of flesh dragon passing through several countries while doing the deed it would be nice to hear about all the climates they’re passing through) , maybe a ting more detail when the mysterious magician loses her husband and kid, it sparked my curiousity as to why she was so cold, but the way it was worded about the lack of feelings in her eyes left too much out. Really can’t complain about anything because it covered all my core likes about LNs. The scene at the beach made me add to the library in preparation for all the exploring they’l be doing in an unknown world(s). You’ve got a great start and I know your writing will only get better.
I loved the scenes, very interesting and the way the author described the horror scenes & the love between them was great. Waiting for the next episodes eagerly,....................
Wow... I was skeptical at first, but this story is totally different. it's a unique sci-fi narrative with nemerous mind bending plot twists.Seriously, I had to keep going back to previous chapters just to make sure I'm following...
A beautifully written story. To be honest, my intention was to read a few chapters but I read more than twenty (and will continue) with great pleasure, even though I am not a fan of fantasy. You pay attention to how you write. Your main character is an expressive, strong personality, the story is captivating. I have no doubts that you can write. Whish you endless inspiration!
The novel is so unique and by unique i meant the plot, the characters and the world, everything felt so fresh when i was reading. The interaction between the MC Chace and the girls were so funny especially during the first few chapters. I am not a native english speaker but i came across no grammar mistakes or weird sentences. It was simple yet gripping.I hope the author release more and more chapters because this is a hidden gem.
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Your details are impeccable and your story line is great. You have a true talent for writing ; I look forward to reading more of your novels. I have thoroughly enjoyed your book. ❤️❤️❤️
