Yuwii
I don't know what to say, even thought the story has just started, the potentiel I see in it, is just great! does anyone like my house of horrors? then this will be up your ally.I noticed that the author also knows how to write a chapter, there was no error as far as I noticed! and finaly, I am sure that you will enjoy this, so support the author, and may he have good luck with the wsa!
Author hope you don't drop this work I'm expecting a lot from this novel in the future ?
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not really my taste but, the trial did convince menice work author
Can webnovel act like a normal company and make some type of post on this novel to tell us readers why this has been dropped? I feel like random cats and dogs are running this place...
Great novels pls update more...f*ck me..
Great novels pls update more...f*ck me..
Great novels pls update more...f*ck me..
Great novels pls update more...f*ck me..
Great novels pls update more...f*ck me..
Great novels pls update more...f*ck me..
Great novels pls update more...f*ck me..
Great novels pls update more...f*ck me..
Great novels pls update more...f*ck me..
Great novels pls update more...f*ck me..
This novel delivers all the xianxia tropes, underestimated MC, young masters and so on, if it's your thing, rejoice. I used to like, but after 3 novels, it gets tough and repetitive.
Seriously, I'm hoping to find a xianxia novel with a ground breaking system - I'm not talking about system novels - where the development doesn't sound like a bunch of nonsense or emptv words.
I'm saying this after (re)reading the Mistborn series, where alomancy is such a ingenious magic system.
This is my favorite story on Webnovel, and one of my favorites over all. That's saying something since I've read thousands of books not including Webnovel, royal road, or other serial sources. I highly recommend this story if you have any interest in litrpg, videogames, it just fantasy in general. Definitely worth the coins, spirit stones, fast passes, etc.
5 stars cuz the author actually cares about readers opinion, and bother to reply to the comments.
Now I just have to fill about 10 characters of nonsense to leave this review.
This novel deserves 5 Stars just because of the cover.
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The story, and its content are solid. It's the formatting that makes it a tough read to get through. Especially in the beginning of the story, you will find that scenes change without a prior indicator, which gives a very disorienting experience.
I really would like to read this entire story, but as the reviews and comments probably indicate by their lack of numbers, its a really tough read to get through.
Should the author find the time to streamline his or her formatting to a more legible level such as those often seen with the more popular novels on here, then I would love to continue reading it.
As it stands, I had to lower my rating because of the formatting and legibility of the novel.
I think the author would greatly improve the fanbase numbers for his or her novels if they'd invest some time into researching this and applied the lessons learned to the entire novel.
This is relly a well written novel. I don't mind giving all the power stones i have. It's worth reading if u like novel abot cultivation. The character development is also good.
