please oh please don't drop this. I don't think I have red anything this week read that is free in a long time. I would even pay for it
This is a great book, just wish the updates would not be erratic. However, it is very well written.
Very interesting work so far. I believe that if the author keeps the updates as promised, this work will be very successful. However, I hope the author doesn't put common things like harem or romance (despite being with the target) , seeing the abundance in other works, making it a bit cloying to read.
A great novel so far with no super bad things about it. Hope the author doesn't drop it! Upload rate most definitely a plus though, 1 a day is hard to find for new novels.
Like author mentioned before, inspired from MVS, you will see those touches everywhere. If you've read the great demon system or whatever it's called, it's like a blend between that and MVS. Very similar to those two, combined.
The story is interesting, the grammar isn't perfect but you won't find yourself questioning yourself too much.
I do hope the MC can become ...less pure, I guess, I know it's supposed to be the angelic system but there can be bad angels too
anyways, don't always trust reviews, read it for yourself
In love the story to be honest. The system up roach was brought out in an exceptional way that is truly amazing. One of a kind! Keep it up author!
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hey, is MC will be a player or not? good start thought[img=recommend]
nice concept and plot, A really good book written by a talented Author. looking forward to the future of the book.
highly recommend this book [img=recommend]
Pretty much a xianxia with a Mc that is considered trash and untalented but gets a fortuitous opportunity and becomes stronger than those more talented than him.
As there are not too many chapters so I will refrain from making too many points but it has plenty of usual problems.
For Example, The background is loosely explained with little to no interactions and the ones that do happen are bland or forced with the usual looking down on Mc. Characters are not fleshed out and author seems to be trying to focus on Mc alone with other characters only being there for convenience.
Sir Author can you do some mini mass release please? for sure it will catch some audience ,,, thanks for the nice start ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Good original novel.
Its been enjoyable so far. Only critic I have is the comparison between the strength of the realms.
How does a normal cultivator differ from the MC? You've rushed through the spirit realm without taking the chance to explain the difference in strength in comparison to a mortal.
Shamelessly gonna rate my own story like any author here on the site hahahaha. As some sort of compensation, I'll be answering any queries you have regarding the story here.