The concept had potential, but the execution fell short. The storytelling was lackluster and dragged on, with a confusing pace that made it difficult to follow from the start. The main characters, MC and ML, seemed one-dimensional and unengaging, leaving their personalities undefined.
While some plot points showed promise, they were marred by missed opportunities and ineffective delivery. Initially, the story captivated me, but the quality took a nosedive after a spoiler – when the MC's demise occurred, the narrative became convoluted and frenetic, making it hard to comprehend the actions and motivations of the characters.
The depiction of the old MC was inconsistent, bouncing between contradictory descriptions that made it challenging to maintain a clear mental image. The focus on both constellations and the plot proved overwhelming, as they were given equal screen time, causing confusion rather than enhancing the story.
Despite these issues, I gave the book an extra star due to the promising beginning. A more streamlined approach, either focusing solely on the constellations or the plot, might have improved the overall reading experience.
Agreed
Im struggling here to find a good one
It's either terrible from the start or starts rly good until it's completely ruined half way to the end ??
the more i read the more i confuse......everyone become long lie?????
is there really no translation for chap 69 to 299..?
Does anyone here has any other novel like Charm of soul pet ? Focus on beast taming and stuff ???
Are there any novels like this? Harem and Yuri genre? If so please let me know (this may just be a matter of taste)?
If you still haven't read it, try it. It's good for me. The mc is narcist but that adds up to his personality and it's comedy. If you don't like his narcist trait, fine but you have to know, characters with personalities are rare. In addition, this novel also pays attention to character development. The mc is super talented but doesn't start out with a perfect personality. Don't worry though, he'll undergo character development. He'll still stay as a narcist but not as narcist as before.
Chapter 38-42, Same Logic, Same Explanation, Same Word. Is The Novel Writing Person Is Totally Idiot. A Whole Important Train Is Going To Other City, Which Taking The Future Of Chinese Child. But It Simply Attacked By Ork. What The People Were Doing, No One First Investigate The Route Is Safe Or Not, If This Was There Regular Travelling Route. 2. And No Any A Grade Or S Grade Person Was On The Train, If By Mistakes Some One Attack The Train, To Save The Child. This Is Totally Shitty Point, Author Just Skip This Chapter, No Need To Write, A Very Shitty Experience. And Almost 10-20 Novel Same Situation Happen, I am Tired From Reading Same Plot Again and again.
Read too fast and thought it was ‘release that bi###’?
interesting story - loved it, waiting for Sharon and Daniel's story , dear author kindly update us .
One of the funniest most charming Heroines I have had the pleasure of reading. Witty, pithy writing and unpredictable and unique story line. Honestly you will fall in love with Elise along with everyone else.
really good